random rhymes

[enjinn]

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just having fun...

im great with rap, yall fake and wack
i dont play with gats
but my flow will take and grab
your spine till it breaks your back
yall a race of rats
licking the cheese about to taste the trap
me shining is a basic fact
i got ways to amaze
i took your girl on a date with a mate
we got drunk and raped her with blades
and gave her the aids
then came on her face
or should i switch to emo style
i feel so vile, my parents think im an evil child
my life is pain look at my face you wont see no smile
i should ghost write those money rhymes
ima stunning guy with a cunning mind
ill shine till the sun is blind
wondering why slim stopped spitting his funny lines
ive had hip hop sites on lock
flow off the stove its nice and hot
precise like a sniper shot
i used to write alot
and was one of the few that bought a mic to rock
you like the cock
itching to record again lemme birth anew
even if its for a short time just a verse or two

[sneakerheadshady]

Nice flow, I pike the alternating long and short lines. Nice writing, good rhyming. Keep at it

[enjinn]

thanks

[Flamez]

Yeah the flow is there with some nice rhymes.