Flow improved throughout the piece didn't care for the first few lines
I feel the ending should be expanded a tiny bit but it's still a nice piece
It's different
bigray - pound cake freestyle
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Re: bigray - pound cake freestyle
by Just Silver » Nov 23rd, '13, 03:56
Good shit guy started a little shaky I liked the Pepsi line
Flow improved throughout the piece didn't care for the first few lines
I feel the ending should be expanded a tiny bit but it's still a nice piece
It's different
Flow improved throughout the piece didn't care for the first few lines
I feel the ending should be expanded a tiny bit but it's still a nice piece
It's different
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Re: bigray - pound cake freestyle
by sneakerheadshady » Nov 25th, '13, 01:09
Its pretty good . I like it( not using this as a lof BTW)
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Re: bigray - pound cake freestyle
by Flamez » Nov 27th, '13, 01:51
Nice read man. It's good I like it yo.
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Re: bigray - pound cake freestyle
by Boston » Nov 30th, '13, 15:32
Flow works good. I dont like the pepsi line that much but the overall vibe was good and story telling was there. Keep it up man
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