Miss Me

[Flamez]

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talking shit about me bad idea you will get killed
skilled with guns spilling blood your fate is sealed
puzzled look no response bitch you fucked up
lips sealed with elmer’s glue keep your mouth shut
fuckin’ slut take these nuts home in a can of planters
put em in a blender feed your whole family out of anger
I’ll walk by your house like a bystander knock on your door
go indoors and sniff the panties out of your drawers
fuck you on the porch once last time before your dead
so that you never forget you cheated on me, no regrets
what you told me bitch I loved you instead you disrespected me
I never disrespected you and now you miss me terribly?
texting me bitch you can’t even call me? fuck your texts
you miss the sex? Well too bad bitch here’s a fuckin’ kleenex
having mixed feelings are we stop pretending like you care
I wish you the best though wait no, I’ll kill you bitch I swear…

Feedback appreciated.

[Cinderella Stan]

Fucking hoes man... I like this a lot, flows great in my head with Em's voice haha.

[Boston]

not bad, it flows but it seems like the same exact flow, you should try changing the flow every 4ish bars and get use to it. this is a good piece though, like the story telling. keep it up man.

[Just Silver]

It's decent flows alright at points liked the elmers glue line
Nice imagery you should Sign up for the tournament

Only thing I can say is you should develop different flows

But your a good writer you should be more active

[Flamez]

Thanks guys and yeah I'll try and change the flow. We'll see about the tourney haha

[Francesco]

Nice drop... keep it up little homie!

[Flamez]

Thanks bro

[Francesco]

Thanks bro

Anytime little homie...

[IBasicallyRage]

This is awesome, flows amazing. Keep it up brah.

[shadyblogger]

Yeah that was pretty dope