Lyrical Pushups

[sneakerheadshady]

Really quick piece
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Yo, the other day this shit popped in my head like 'whatsup'
I was practicing writing, more wood than a woodchuck
realized what i was doing was just lyrical push ups
strengthening my rhymes like doing a 100 pull ups
Other kids out in the sun, im working my lungs
doing sprints, and working hard to overcome
im just a teenage netcee, only been writing for a few months
in fact theres plenty of kids in the slums,
banging on empty bottles like they're drums
rapping until theres no more breath in their lungs
they really deserve alot more than those guns,
moms and dads killed before there done sucking their thumbs
i guess i do this rap shit because of the bums,
and maybe in 10 years i can give them some of my funds
but now im swallowing rhymes like pills past my gums
and connecting some words like im adding some sums
lyrical push ups is how i'll become
good enough to make you jam to my puns

[Just Silver]

This was decent simplistic rhyming with a Semi Smooth flow
Can't say much since its a relatively small piece but I've seen better from you

Put out maybe a longer topical it'd be good practice

[sneakerheadshady]

Alright yah, I just had a few rhymes floating around in my head that I wnated to use lol

[ilovebender.com]

Really quick piece
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Yo, the other day this shit popped in my head like 'whatsup'
I was practicing writing, more wood than a woodchuck
realized what i was doing was just lyrical push ups

I liked the flow, and then it just went on like a train from there, v. good flow.

It was okay.

[sneakerheadshady]

Really quick piece
Lof: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=166424&p=2458649#p2458649

Yo, the other day this shit popped in my head like 'whatsup'
I was practicing writing, more wood than a woodchuck
realized what i was doing was just lyrical push ups

I liked the flow, and then it just went on like a train from there, v. good flow.

It was okay.

pretty much how i felt when i looked at it after posting it tbh

thanks for the feed