Lyrical Trap (Full Song)(new chorus)

[Edge]

i dont really write full songs, so this is different for me... extremely appreciate feedback

It seems of lately, that beef is of the essence
But theses fake emcees careers are evanescence
So I went straight to God, asked for heavens lessons
Now let my raps shine light, like they’re incandescence
Its like God and I, have talks through mental telepathy
No one else but Him, looks at me with some empathy
So what I say, best believe to the fullest degree
Lyrically on the mic, don’t push or pull this bully
Im lyrically spittin out insults and spoken assaults
I approached God’s safe of raps, and opened the vault
And what came out, was all this lyrical talent
Now rap is in my brain like chemical imbalance
So now I spit what I spit in a God-like fashion
And I love what I do with a God-like passion
Im gunna always keep writing, and spittin my raps
So get out of my way or you’ll just get in my traps
And my traps are secured, theres no way to get out
All you’ll hear is silence, ’cept the screams u let out
It starts creepin through your head, will you escape?
When u realize you wont, it just fills you with hate
So you yell and you scream, even pull your hair out
Scratchin at the walls, you just pray to tear out
But you wont, cause you see, God is on my side
Now you realize with me you shouldn’t have tried

Finding a trap like this, its just so rare
I mean every word I say, to this I swear
Everyone come in, right to my lyrical trap
It’s a trap of words, that I spit in my raps
Come in to my dungeon, my secret rap lair
Heavenly words flow, just like a prayer

As u sit scared in my trap, you’re extremely silent and shook
I walk in, for the first time you see me, and violent I look
You are fully petrified, nervous at the knife in my hands
Got a look on my face, that says ending your life is my plan
Its quiet, but the tension is loudly building extremely quickly
You start thinking in your head if you could flee me swiftly
Chances are that you can not, plus my trap is a puzzle
I hear all of you thoughts, so I give your trap a muzzle
As your sitting there thinking, that this guy is terrifying
I see it clearly on your face, that u have a fear of dying
Theres no lying or deceiving, I am completely omnipotent
Cause God’s vault of lyrics, has turned me to this poet
Your nervous still, expecting a life of torture and pain
But you can’t figure out all of the thoughts in my brain
Its insane the way I make you feel deranged, its so strange
Your waiting for words, wonder the range of exchange
That might happen, when we finally speak our first words
that look on my face, looks like im down to burst nerves
But in all reality, Im just trying to give off what iv learned
Cause the thoughts burned in my brain and iv turned
A new leaf, now I must help you out with writing rhymes
And how to deal with the truest battle, that you fight inside
All this time, you thought I was going to obliterate you
But as you see, im just trying to help and invigorate you

Finding a trap like this, its just so rare
I mean every word I say, to this I swear
Everyone come in, right to my lyrical trap
It’s a trap of words, that I spit in my raps
Come in to my dungeon, my secret rap lair
Heavenly words flow, just like a prayer

[Yah-hah]

The beginning of this rhyme scheme is ill as fuck bro. Wanna see a whole song definitely. One of the best rhyming wise from you

[Edge]

The beginning of this rhyme scheme is ill as fuck bro. Wanna see a whole song definitely. One of the best rhyming wise from you

thanks man appreciate... il try coming up with a full song for it

[Edge]

i made a full song out of it now... so let me know what you think

[Element.]

Nice man

[Edge]

i dont usually bump my shit... but u fuckers arent giving any feed lol

[Fa-Q]

Fuck Edge...this shit is good. You're foreal foreal improving, the first verse is crazy dope...kinda slowed down toward the end but still loved it...9.0/10

[Edge]

Fuck Edge...this shit is good. You're foreal foreal improving, the first verse is crazy dope...kinda slowed down toward the end but still loved it...9.0/10

thanks man i appreciate it man

[Yah-hah]

Yeah wat I said for the 1st verse I saw for the second, I mean beginning of both were mad sick man. Dont think they fell off just the beginnings were so ill ya know. Really good job man

[Edge]

Yeah wat I said for the 1st verse I saw for the second, I mean beginning of both were mad sick man. Dont think they fell off just the beginnings were so ill ya know. Really good job man

thanks man, i wanna work on the chorus and maybe scratch that one and make a new one but i wanted to get this out, i never get excited about what i write but this kinda told a story and i was egar to see people opinions lol

so thanks for the feed

[Just Silver]

It was different but id say its a 4/5 worships


as its been said the 1st verse really set it

as the chorus goes its decent but when its inaudible its too hard to tell if it would be good or not

being more descriptive would have took this one a notch up

[Edge]

It was different but id say its a 4/5 worships


as its been said the 1st verse really set it

as the chorus goes its decent but when its inaudible its too hard to tell if it would be good or not

being more descriptive would have took this one a notch up

alright thanks man... i wish i could record, but got no mic

[gutawafang]

I didn't like how you spammed the word "God". LOL. The word is everywhere on the first verse man. But the punches involving the word is pretty good. Like "opening god's safe". Nice.

The chorus was like hypnotizing and it's not a compliment. It's creative but it's kinda arrogant. I don't mean offense man. I just don't like the chorus man.

The second verse is the highlight of the whole shit. Nice vocabulary and less usage of the "God" word. Second verse is perfect man.

Overall, I guess it's worth the read because of many punches man.

[Edge]

I didn't like how you spammed the word "God". LOL. The word is everywhere on the first verse man. But the punches involving the word is pretty good. Like "opening god's safe". Nice.

The chorus was like hypnotizing and it's not a compliment. It's creative but it's kinda arrogant. I don't mean offense man. I just don't like the chorus man.

The second verse is the highlight of the whole shit. Nice vocabulary and less usage of the "God" word. Second verse is perfect man.

Overall, I guess it's worth the read because of many punches man.

thanks man, i appreciate it

[Element.]

Hey man last time i didnt say much but

you have been improving alot man just keep it up
and i really like this pieace