Lyrical Trinity~ No Fucks Given

[Man1x]

30-45 minutes, depending on the concept.

And thanks a lot.

Dang, I guess i'll have to put my mind to it and sit down longer with mine. I always assumed people just wrote dope shit in 5 minutes and either you have it or you don't

[J.R.]

30-45 minutes, depending on the concept.

And thanks a lot.

Dang, I guess i'll have to put my mind to it and sit down longer with mine. I always assumed people just wrote dope shit in 5 minutes and either you have it or you don't

Oh no,

A excellent artist can write one verse in 30 minutes,

A great one can write a verse and edit it several times in a couple of days.

I put this song out in 5 minutes,

Geno is excellent, me and C.R.E.A.M Are great In my opinion. on this song I was in a rush.

[WakeUpShow]

Geno...you tore this piece a new asshole. To cream and B, sorry but these verse seem like the same old from you two.

[Innovation]

Good verses all round, good job!

Geno, you took this in my opinion. As usual your rhyming was solid and on point. I loved the part where your fan spoke to you, it reminded me so much of Eminem during his SSLP days. I'm pretty sure that inspired you? Once again, great verse, some very witty lines and an enjoyable read.

C.R.E.A.M you're finally structuring your verses better! Dude, you were structuring your verses fantastically in Dropbox, stick to it! It makes it much, much easier to read and to catch the multi's. Your verse was also solid, man you've come along way since we first started our mass collaborations haha. Awesome verse, some solid multi's in there. I though this punchline was very impressive also. "I'm planting my nuts seeds to the ground where yo bird ate"

BShady14, your verse was pretty good. You just send to keep a solid structure so it's easier to read which will have a positive effect on the flow. Like Geno and C.R.E.A.M, your verse was also pretty good. Again, pretty good rhyming although I think you could work on your rhyme transitioning. Other than that, it was a good drop.

How about Lyrical Trinity feat Innovation?

Aha, good job guys. Good drops from all of ya.

[J.R.]

Innovation could hop on the one Menzo's on.

The beat is big enough for one more.

Support this.

[J.R.]

I changed my mind and started writing.

[J.R.]

:worship:

It's lyrical, so basically it's really just random lyrical rhyming onslaught, which is my whole verse lols.

[Sam.]

BShady14 : Pretty nice there ,flow was the thing I liked the most about your piece IMO,some lines seemed forced to me like this one “Never give a fuck, fuck you up and your queenie mom” and “Like me, I only help my friends out, if you're not one,” other wise it was all good ,one last advice stop using the word B to rhyme man ,irritates .

C.R.E.A.M: Looks like u based the whole verse on yourself ,it was funny at places and ws serious at places to ,but man please if your writing on yourself stop using I’m so much does not look nice .

Geno:Best of the bunch ,dope shit man I thing the only thing I did not like is the random flip of lines in the same bar ,that made no sense as compared to the previous line

Some on them are :

And I'll follow through like a stalker moving in silence,
Then create my own religion and start disproving all science,

I'd sooner practice backflips while trippin' on hallucinogenic acid,
Join the military and begin kissin' all the lieutenants asses,

[Sam.]

What you mean by random flips? Sorry, just a little confusing lol.

See the bars that i highlighted ,unlike your previous bars like this one ..

I'll make sure when you hear 'em you'll never be sleepin' again,
Whether you dream or you can't, remember I will be haunting you,

..The 1st line has some relation with the second one ,hope you get this point [too technical feed i know].

[JamaicanPattlez]

Real beast, you guys! I thought it was dope, especially Geno's verse. Shit, I wanna write like that!

[JamaicanPattlez]

Thanks a lot homie. You wanna write like me? lol. That's a big compliment.

Course it is, man, I give respect to where it's due!

[Eedee]

The rhyme scheme and multi's in Geno's verse are outstanding. Just amazing. Nice work all three, but Geno's stands out the most!

[SliK]

I wish I had read this earlier. I really enjoyed all three verses, I've gotta say though lyrically Geno was on point. I enjoy the way you carry your rhymes into the first half of the following bars. And the Autotune line was dope.

BShady I could actually relate to yours the most. The other two were more zany but you provided a reason for why you don't give a fuck. It was more serious I felt, but kept it on topic.

Cream I liked how zany yours was. And the way you carry your rhymes onto the next bar.

Everyone flowed well I found and worked cohesively together. Dope piece guys