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bombs scour and screech

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Re: bombs scour and screech

Postby Matt Holck » Sep 4th, '11, 16:44

when I was younger and with another,
we never bothered to look forward
we wander together fingers tethered
parks and levees explored
no need for dreams endured
NO WAR

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Re: bombs scour and screech

Postby Man1x » Sep 4th, '11, 17:46

Your good but some of these lines just leave me mind fucked, idk. Something else these are.
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Re: bombs scour and screech

Postby B.A.D. » Sep 5th, '11, 11:01

locked.

Follow the rules or get fucking banned. that simple :y:
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