by RainMan44 » Sep 14th, '11, 22:55
Excuse me for the corny metaphor but, this shit flowed like a river tbh
Flow was beautiful.
I actually caught that 'Geno' punch. Dope as fuck.
The rhyming is still above average, don't see why some are saying it's not. You might've had better pieces, but this is still great.
Mind feedin' some of mine? I just typed 2 different tracks (18 bars and Money Can't Make the Man...not completed)...feed whichever you'd like. Or you can be extra generous and feed both
Just post a link to a piece of yours on them and I will return the favor afterwards haha
"This dude doing this interview wants me to spin a few,
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."
GOAT
