Trio - Out To Get Us

[Innovation]

You were all great. IMO JP came the hardest with his multies, Inno with story telling, and GT had a good mixture of both.

My only problem with this piece is Inno's line:

My fate ain't in the ground, I'll make sure of it,

It seems very out of place, not rhyming with anything. I can't get it to rhyme with "distance". I dunno.

It was great though, keep it up.

I think Innov was rhyming the it part with Distance, lol. Thanks for the feed, brah.

It's apart of a different rhyme scheme, that's where I switched it. park in the distance/heart will be missing - I probably could have made it transition a bit better though.

Thanks for the feed though, Geno. Appreciated.

[JamaicanPattlez]

You were all great. IMO JP came the hardest with his multies, Inno with story telling, and GT had a good mixture of both.

My only problem with this piece is Inno's line:

My fate ain't in the ground, I'll make sure of it,

It seems very out of place, not rhyming with anything. I can't get it to rhyme with "distance". I dunno.

It was great though, keep it up.

I think Innov was rhyming the it part with Distance, lol. Thanks for the feed, brah.

It's apart of a different rhyme scheme, that's where I switched it. park in the distance/heart will be missing - I probably could have made it transition a bit better though.

Thanks for the feed though, Geno. Appreciated.

Ohh, okay lol. That makes sense then.

[Mr.DGAF]

Solid from all of you to be honest. Lyrically it's on point, the hook is a bit meh, only compared to the rest of it though. The verses were very coherent in their topic and scheme, and it was cool to see how you guys executed it differently at the same time. I think Inno had the best verse, with JP following after because of the crazy multies. CREAM, your verse was fire as well, don't get me wrong man, but it just seemed like the other two may have been a pinch better. Anyway, good stuff guys, this has me quite hyped for the rest of the drops from Trio.

Shit, everbodys starting a group, I'm gonna re-name myself and start a group with my alter ego tbh.

[JamaicanPattlez]

Solid from all of you to be honest. Lyrically it's on point, the hook is a bit meh, only compared to the rest of it though. The verses were very coherent in their topic and scheme, and it was cool to see how you guys executed it differently at the same time. I think Inno had the best verse, with JP following after because of the crazy multies. CREAM, your verse was fire as well, don't get me wrong man, but it just seemed like the other two may have been a pinch better. Anyway, good stuff guys, this has me quite hyped for the rest of the drops from Trio.

Shit, everbodys starting a group, I'm gonna re-name myself and start a group with my alter ego tbh.

Haha, or join someone and make the TR Slaughterhouse. Thank you!

[SG.]

Ropeadopedope verses from all of you. This was a great concept, and you pulled it off elegantly. In terms of who had the better verses:

JP > GT > Inno

Hook was a little bit okay. Not much, but a little bit.

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[Spyder]

basicaly agree with whats been said by everyone, JP love the line rhyming and maintaining the story,flow and entire aspect of the piece.

Inno and GT came nice too, the best ive seen from either of you but still good none the less.


are you guys doing more work in the future. you got the ep right?

[J.R.]

basicaly agree with whats been said by everyone, JP love the line rhyming and maintaining the story,flow and entire aspect of the piece.

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This, and GT did excellent also. Nice flow and rhymes, story was nice, I enjoyed this piece overall. Will be watching for more.
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