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The Rise WRITTEN EP - TRACK 6 THE DEVIL

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Postby Man1x » Oct 19th, '11, 21:52

I gotcha Sam but if your doing schemes like:

A
A
B
B
A

or

A
B
A
B

Wouldn't it throw off the flow? I thought these schemes were reserved for poetry
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Re: The Rise WRITTEN EP - TRACK 6 THE DEVIL

Postby Sam. » Oct 19th, '11, 21:58

Man1x wrote:I gotcha Sam but if your doing schemes like:

A
A
B
B
A

or

A
B
A
B

Wouldn't it throw off the flow? I thought these schemes were reserved for poetry

Yes,they are meant for poetry.
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Re: The Rise WRITTEN EP - TRACK 6 THE DEVIL

Postby Man1x » Oct 19th, '11, 22:00

Sam. wrote:
Man1x wrote:I gotcha Sam but if your doing schemes like:

A
A
B
B
A

or

A
B
A
B

Wouldn't it throw off the flow? I thought these schemes were reserved for poetry

Yes,they are meant for poetry.


Okay, however you say that I can do things like:

A
A
B
B
B
C
C
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Re: The Rise WRITTEN EP - TRACK 6 THE DEVIL

Postby Sam. » Oct 19th, '11, 22:04

Man1x wrote:
Sam. wrote:
Man1x wrote:I gotcha Sam but if your doing schemes like:

A
A
B
B
A

or

A
B
A
B

Wouldn't it throw off the flow? I thought these schemes were reserved for poetry

Yes,they are meant for poetry.


Okay, however you say that I can do things like:

A
A
B
B
B
C
C

No.

A
A
B
B
B
C
C

Is done when the the 3rd B is a continuation of the 2nd B,which looks like a Bar.
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Re: The Rise WRITTEN EP - TRACK 6 THE DEVIL

Postby Man1x » Oct 19th, '11, 22:15

So, I can do this:

A
A
B
B
B
C
C
C

Or not? I'm not sure if you said yes or no to the last example
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Re: The Rise WRITTEN EP - TRACK 6 THE DEVIL

Postby Sam. » Oct 19th, '11, 22:21

Man1x wrote:So, I can do this:

A
A
B
B
B
C
C
C

Or not? I'm not sure if you said yes or no to the last example

Not necessarily.
Snoop Doog mostly has that kind of Rhyme Scheme if you listen to "That Good Feat Khalifa" you will notice.
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Re: The Rise WRITTEN EP - TRACK 6 THE DEVIL

Postby Man1x » Oct 19th, '11, 22:36

So, can I or can I not use these two rhyme schemes? I'm sorry but I just don't get if your saying yes or no.
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Re: The Rise WRITTEN EP - TRACK 6 THE DEVIL

Postby Sam. » Oct 19th, '11, 22:40

Man1x wrote:So, can I or can I not use these two rhyme schemes? I'm sorry but I just don't get if your saying yes or no.

Am I your teacher for telling you what to do ? if you're comfortable with it then go ahead.
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Re: The Rise WRITTEN EP - TRACK 6 THE DEVIL

Postby Man1x » Oct 19th, '11, 22:45

Sam. wrote:
Man1x wrote:So, can I or can I not use these two rhyme schemes? I'm sorry but I just don't get if your saying yes or no.

Am I your teacher for telling you what to do ? if you're comfortable with it then go ahead.

Sorry, just trying to get my head around it.
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