Let's Talk

[Blu]

This is some good shit. The first few lines INSTANTLY reminded me of Marshall Mathers though.. haha, in a good way.

You had a Rick Ross line? I didn't even notice it!

Good shit though brah.

4.5/5 mics in the Source.

[Mr.DGAF]

Firstly, nice to see you writing again man, haven't seen you write in a while. Now, onto the piece:

Damn, this is really hot. Awesome choice of beat, I pretty much picked up the flow perfectly on the first listen, and that really impressed me. The topic was pretty good, and what you were talking about actually fit the style of the beat, at least that's what I think. The vocab is good, as always, that's never a problem for you though. This piece is nice, not your best work, but I really liked it.

Think you could hit up Geno and I's piece?

Eternal Nightmares

[Sam.]

You just started writing a few months I guess and you have evolved as a writer so much ?!! This shit is amazing and technically this is dope.

I can see you have observed and learned a lot form Gennette ,almost feels as if he wrote it. Keep at it bra

[Sam.]

Acts more like a motivational drive ?! Yeah !

Wish I wasn't lazy & fucked up all the time.

[Sam.]

Definitely a good thing when you say you don't wanna just focus on the Rhyme Scheme alone.The day you focus on what you actually wanna say in your verses, you grow as an Artist(Writer) faster. Keep that attitude bro.