The Anthem (TR Collaboration)

[J.R.]

DAMN! I just gotta say this is probably the most dope piece I've seen on TR in a while. With Menzo taking the cake, and Zabe at a close second. Honestly, I love this piece. Be back quoting each verses either later on tonight or tomorrow, got a baseball game, but impressive. Worth the wait.

[SG.]

DAMN! I just gotta say this is probably the most dope piece I've seen on TR in a while. With Menzo taking the cake, and Zabe at a close second. Honestly, I love this piece. Be back quoting each verses either later on tonight or tomorrow, got a baseball game, but impressive. Worth the wait.

Bullshit. I had a few good lines but I honestly thought my verse wasn't great.

Everyone killed it though.

[Spyder]

i dont know rex or nameless.

alot of you sound too much like Em... just sayin

love the big collaborations but outta the three ive seen i gotta say sorry but this is 3rd.

Geno you came really weak, no hate but sorry deff seemed rushed and random.

Crashband i think you coulda done better with that starting bar, had potential to be a nice punch
with the wordplay of 'gut feeling'

not bad guys, but each coulda step it up

[Mr.DGAF]

Happy to be a part of this. I won't have a computer until Friday, I'll leave in depth feed on everyone else then. But good stuff guys.

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

HAHAH I liked this a lot guys this was great!! My favorite was the last verse that I think was Menzo? I love how you nearly rhymed every syllable of supercalifradgelisticexpealidocious!! Menzo, you had a great verse, awesome multis and very creative I liked it a lot!!

@ Mr.DGAF probably my second favorite verse on this track, I liked all the inner rhyming and as always, your very consistent with the multis, I liked how this verse was sort of different from what I have been seeing you put out, idk what it was about it but its great!!

Insane Trex- My 3rd favorite, just because I love your style dude, its more horror core and the way you started out your verse was Sick!!!

Geno- your verse was solid! not my favorite one from you but I love all the stuff you put out so its all good! Absolutely loved this part: oh, it's gettin' violent now, and I took the hydrants out,
Come on, try and find me now! Here's a hint: I won't be found,
If you listen I'll be roaring loud, through my foamin' mouth,
While they soak it down I'll be floatin' on my broken couch,
Across the Missisippi with a pissy bitch who hopes I drown,

Great rhyming dude!

And the other 3 are pretty much tied for me, I felt they all were pretty solid with the multis and creativeness!! Great job everyone! Sorry I didnt go into detail for the last couple but I am tired of typing and I'm sure my input is next to useless haha PEACE!

[CrashBand]

This was dope. I'll leave feed later when I've gone over it properly. Came out well though

i dont know rex or nameless.

alot of you sound too much like Em... just sayin

love the big collaborations but outta the three ive seen i gotta say sorry but this is 3rd.

Geno you came really weak, no hate but sorry deff seemed rushed and random.

Crashband i think you coulda done better with that starting bar, had potential to be a nice punch
with the wordplay of 'gut feeling'

not bad guys, but each coulda step it up

-Gut Feeling
-Sick to your stomach
-Splatter your spleen

[JamaicanPattlez]

This was pretty incredible. I haven't really been posting in this section for a while, but I've been popping in here and there, reading the verses y'all put up and the progress you guys made, I'm enjoying it. I actually liked Geno's the most, I got a few chuckles for it. But everyone killed it. Keep it up guys.

[JamaicanPattlez]

Thanks homie, good to know you're still peeping around

Haha, I check in from time to time, but tonight I felt like feeding some people. May as well, right?

[JamaicanPattlez]

Thanks dude, glad you found the humour. Was kinda trying to tone down my multies and go for some more witty, funny lines. It's a cypher after all.

No problem man, I definitely get what you mean. Keep it up!

[Mr.DGAF]

Okay, for some feed:

Nameless
I was surprised, I expected something a little subpar considering it's been so long since I've seen you write. But this was pretty good. The rhymes were a bit eh, maybe an accent makes a lot of those rhyme more. But the flow and what was said in your verse pick up where the rhyming may lay off. My favorite line was the God screws with temperature one, that was pretty sick.

Zabe
One of my favorite verses honestly. This surprised me a lot, I really didn't expect you to turn in a verse like this. This may be your most complete verse, the rhymes are nice and make sense, the flow is on point, and you get the point across with the rhymes and all. The last two lines were nice, I sense a little bit of hostility haha. Anyways, good verse my dude.

Crashband
Again, another surprising verse. I haven't seen you drop anything recently either, but I remember you being pretty good when you did. The first bar set up a pretty nice punch with the gut feeling wordplay. The multies are pretty damn nice, you've always been solid at that. But this piece is very coherent, the bars come together quite nicely. Good stuff man.

Geno
Stop. Quit writing, pack your bags, and do something else with your life. Nah haha, just kidding. I got what you were doing with this piece, and it was refreshing. Usually with you it's multie overload, which isn't a bad thing haha. But it was cool to see the rhyming take a back seat to focus a bit more on the wit of the lines. And that's not to say the rhyming was bad or anything like that, just that I could see they weren't the main focus of this piece.

T-Rex
That's gross. First thing I should say is that the way the rhymes flowed in this piece were really, really nice. They really enhanced the flow, which was already really nice. The first part of your piece was my favorite, the first 4 bars flowed and rhymed really well and you've always been good at painting a disturbing scene in my head.

Alieus
Damn. I mean, it's like a dog jumped on your keyboard and hit a couple keys, you saw it, and agreed that it should go into the piece. But for real, this was really nice. As always the rhymes flow so perfectly, it's scary. The first bar was maybe my favorite part for some reason haha, it was again how smoothly the rhymes rolled off. The Tyrannosaures Rex tryna masterbate line had me laughing, good stuff. Some really funny lines in here, and of course the supercalifragilisticecpialidocious line was cool, it kinda reminded me of the Eminem line in Almost Famous.


This was nice guys, everybody brought some really good stuff.

[SG.]

Give me a moment to compose my thoughts on this.

Name, you should do the same. Where's your "lengthy feedback"?

[Blu]

I feel what name's saying, there's definitely an Em vibe oozing out your verse Geno.

But it's still a great verse.

Just remember the ooze.

[Block]

I just saw this. I really got under that guy's skin, huh?

[SG.]

I was never here.