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Re: When fingertips speed

Postby Yah-hah » Jul 31st, '12, 22:37

Yeah man it was called like multistage down ya throat or something lol. After this battle tournament ill be writing a bunch more we can collaboration then ha
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: When fingertips speed

Postby Gummybur » Aug 4th, '12, 03:11

I literally felt like the flow in this piece physically took my head, and made it go from left to right with out checking back for a second to understand the flow. Infuckingcredible.
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Re: When fingertips speed

Postby Yah-hah » Aug 7th, '12, 03:21

Gummybur wrote:I literally felt like the flow in this piece physically took my head, and made it go from left to right with out checking back for a second to understand the flow. Infuckingcredible.


Aye thanks checking it out man glad you enjoyed it
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: When fingertips speed

Postby EvryOnesACrtc » Aug 29th, '12, 20:32

This is pretty ill. You're obviously a pro at this stuff so I don't really know what to tell you except these were my favorite lines:

So I figure I'll have to meet them both sooner or later,
Or at least until someone disproves theres a savior,
Pushing my pen so hard that I'm bruising the paper,
Like I'm losing the flavor so some salt in my would would just be doing a favor

Best for last. That's really an awesome way to close the whole thing. Good job, dude.
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