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Eedee - Silent Killer

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Re: Eedee - Silent Killer

Postby Atone » Jul 29th, '12, 06:33

i read this in the voice of Rob Zombie or Marilyn Manson slowly rapping it in a creepy way and it sounded bad ass

great multi's, great imagination, the story was awesome
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Re: Eedee - Silent Killer

Postby Eedee » Jul 29th, '12, 22:48

Good looks! Thanks guys.
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Re: Eedee - Silent Killer

Postby Eedee » Jul 29th, '12, 22:55

Damn, Geno and Menzo are feeding me again. The world really is ending soon...

Nah, kidding. Thanks guys! :y:
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Re: Eedee - Silent Killer

Postby EvryOnesACrtc » Aug 31st, '12, 01:42

This was very enjoyable. Filled with rhymes everywhere. I especially liked the chorus. I wish it would've had a better ending though. Maybe like a twist of some sort. Otherwise, great drop.
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