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Re: Ego - Aquatic Ambiance

Postby ShadysDisciple » Aug 7th, '12, 21:08

Geno wrote:Menzo makes thread

Blames Geno for typo

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Forever A-Mole :shifty:

On Topic: This was dope! You guys have undeniable chemistry as a duo and I can tell you really feed off eachother.

Best lines from Menzo:
Woke up, in an ocean of water
Hopin' to float but my boat is improper
Buoyant? Nope, it's just awkward

and

The liquid around gets colder and darker
Alone and my guards up, auras in the zone,

Best lines from Geno:

Will Hip Hop live, will we fail in the quest?
Rather mail in the check than just stay with the rest,

and

I'll instill my spark in my alias now,
Woulda killed my heart lettin' Alieus drown,
So I favour him now as my right hand man,
We'll be saving the sound as we light this land,

Really good drop guys.
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