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720 Ft. Geno [2418 EP, Track 7]

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Re: 720 Ft. Geno [2418 EP, Track 7]

Postby Eedee » Sep 14th, '12, 23:40

Menzo wrote:There hardly is ever just random multi tracks...Geno and I have a continuing theme of storytelling, DGAF and Eedee are always dropping something very conceptual - Hell, recently our groups intertwined with Geno and Eedee writing a conceptual storytelling track.

It's far from "multies galore" unless you mean, "Conceptually creative accompanied with multies galore".


This.

This section is filled with conceptual tracks, not just people dropping "multies galore" for the fuck of it (which isn't a bad thing time to time). :y:
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Re: 720 Ft. Geno [2418 EP, Track 7]

Postby Eedee » Sep 14th, '12, 23:51

Geno wrote:I don't even remember the last time I just rhymed for the hell of it.


When was the last time you jerked off?
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Re: 720 Ft. Geno [2418 EP, Track 7]

Postby Eedee » Sep 14th, '12, 23:59

:laughing: This is why I post on this forum.
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Re: 720 Ft. Geno [2418 EP, Track 7]

Postby Blu » Sep 15th, '12, 00:47

Menzo wrote:There hardly is ever just random multi tracks...Geno and I have a continuing theme of storytelling, DGAF and Eedee are always dropping something very conceptual - Hell, recently our groups intertwined with Geno and Eedee writing a conceptual storytelling track.

It's far from "multies galore" unless you mean, "Conceptually creative accompanied with multies galore".

Link me then... most of the time it's just a copy of Em's old work.
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Re: 720 Ft. Geno [2418 EP, Track 7]

Postby EvryOnesACrtc » Sep 15th, '12, 02:40

Blu wrote:Tbh I haven't really seen a single creative piece in this section yet.


Not even my 'Insecurities' piece, which you complimented? :'(

For the people that are curious as to what piece I'm talking about, it can be found here:

viewtopic.php?f=24&t=147908 Plug, plug :8)
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Re: 720 Ft. Geno [2418 EP, Track 7]

Postby J.R. » Sep 15th, '12, 23:41

Geno wrote:
Blu wrote:
Menzo wrote:There hardly is ever just random multi tracks...Geno and I have a continuing theme of storytelling, DGAF and Eedee are always dropping something very conceptual - Hell, recently our groups intertwined with Geno and Eedee writing a conceptual storytelling track.

It's far from "multies galore" unless you mean, "Conceptually creative accompanied with multies galore".

Link me then... most of the time it's just a copy of Em's old work.

Nobody here does that. Just because JR chose Kim for this track doesn't mean it copies Em.

Here:

Crossing Paths
The Roast


Just because you said that,
viewtopic.php?f=24&t=148107

Adding on with my own material (it is my thread, gotta plug the merch, as john cena would say :laughing: )

Completely original topic? check.
Multis? Check.
storytelling? Check.
Flow? Check.
Etc.

We win. :smoking:

Thanks for the feed guys, btw. Geno, lock this up please. I don't want anymore bitching. :y: If he does it on anymore of my drops with no actual feed claiming "You should figure out how to get better.." well that's dumb, I can't figure out what I did wrong. I need guidance. thats why people post there pieces.
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Re: 720 Ft. Geno [2418 EP, Track 7]

Postby Blu » Sep 16th, '12, 00:36

J.R. wrote:Completely original topic? check.
Multis? Check.
storytelling? Check.
Flow? Check.
Etc.

I read the first two lines of that written you just now posted and I gotta say it wasn't original at all. You were obviously moping at the time and decided to try and "help" other writers, probably even described how it felt being in that place. I don't know, I didn't bother reading the thing.

Storytelling? How was any of that storytelling? Probably the shittiest storytelling I've ever read...there is no plot, characters, conflict, absolutely nothing that makes up a story.

I don't really give a damn about your precious multi's, but I'll agree on the flow.

Good day sir.
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