[1] Just The Two of us [CC]

[Eedee]

We were talking. Yknow, I sent my part of the intro and shit to him and my verse with the concept already in our heads.

He probably didn't get the name drops (he doesn't feed in here a lot be honest) and assumed it was to everyone.

There ya go.

Drop it. Not worth it anymore.

Atone knows who both our groups are, he's not THAT stupid.

[Atone]

We were talking. Yknow, I sent my part of the intro and shit to him and my verse with the concept already in our heads.

He probably didn't get the name drops (he doesn't feed in here a lot be honest) and assumed it was to everyone.

There ya go.

Drop it. Not worth it anymore.

Atone knows who both our groups are, he's not THAT stupid.

I know who Ego is, but like i said, when he said Ego on his part i had no idea he was talkin about you guys, the whole concept of this was to re-introduce Creative Control with an Intro, Eedee if i had beef with you i would not have contacted you to collab a few weeks ago, same with Geno,

[Eedee]

You just can't argue this. You obviously intended some malicious meaning behind that intro, it's not even up for debate.

DGAF thinks this was a diss.
I think this was a diss.

Hell, even Menzo thinks this was a fucking diss.

[J.R.]

Everyone mad. K. Everyone diss us. I'll just stop posting here. Later

[Eedee]

Everyone mad. K. Everyone diss us. I'll just stop posting here. Later

Lol. Was it that easy?

[Mr.DGAF]

I really liked the concept of J.R.'s verse, but the execution left something to be desired. The way it was structured was weird for the flow, and it made the rhymes tougher to catch. In a way that's good because it shows you're trying to increase complexity, which is something I've been hoping for with your recent improvement. But I don't think it worked here. The rhymes weren't great, but the way you told the story in the second half kinda made up for it. Rhyming isn't everything but for a guy that's been at it as long as you have, you gotta start incorporating a little more. Even if it isn't a rhyming track, if it's a story or something, just two or three syllables can make a huge difference, ya know?

Atone, you've been improving as well lately. In fact, I think you guys both have hit your stride right as you decided to come back together for CC. The rhymes were pretty cool, I always loved any scheme with that "music" sound, the "ooo" sound in it is one of my favorite sounds. The flow was pretty nice to get, but I also feel like your work could benefit a bit from the approach J.R. is taking in trying to get a bit more complicated in schemes and placement. It'll take some time, it's something we're all constantly trying to work on, but it'll go miles in making your verses more enjoyable.

As far as the intro, I figured it was just a kinda boisterous statement, like an "I'm better than you" type of thing. Which is quite common in writing raps, even here haha. I didn't really take too much offense, but I thought the piece could've been better.

[J.R.]

Everyone mad. K. Everyone diss us. I'll just stop posting here. Later

Lol. Was it that easy?

No



@Menzo, DGAF, thanks for the feed. DGAF, I agree about the whole hit our stride I feel like the past month or so is the best we've both been on here (and we're hoping with dropping pieces we can get better)

Menzo, I'm working with you. I would totally diss you and fuck that up. I would totally do it to Geno right after he backs me up in the 720 thread or after we've had a long history writing together. Fuck that.

And Eedee, (I'm not addressing you as catastrophic cause It doesn't apart DGAF is in this) I don't really like you. Your annoying and I'd prefer you fuck off. But, ill applaud you for that diss track. It was pretty funny. I liked it and it was well written.

[Eedee]

I love you too.

And that wasn't a diss track, by the way...

[J.R.]

I love you too.

And that wasn't a diss track, by the way...

My bad, I only read 3-5 lines of it. Skimmed it, on my ipod atm.

[Eedee]

I love you too.

And that wasn't a diss track, by the way...

My bad, I only read 3-5 lines of it. Skimmed it, on my ipod atm.

But... then how did you... nah fuck it. Not worth it.

If you read the whole thing you'll see it's not a diss.

[J.R.]

I love you too.

And that wasn't a diss track, by the way...

My bad, I only read 3-5 lines of it. Skimmed it, on my ipod atm.

But... then how did you... nah fuck it. Not worth it.

If you read the whole thing you'll see it's not a diss.

[Eedee]

Just saying.

[J.R.]

Just saying.

Why would I read it?

Edit: not saying that to be a dick honestly.

[Eedee]

Just saying.

Why would I read it?

Edit: not saying that to be a dick honestly.

Well you said you already skimmed through 5 lines. That's basically one third of it. Takes more laziness to not read it at that point than to read it lol.

But I can understand why you wouldn't read it. You dislike me. But I read and feed your stuff... but it's whatever. Honestly, if you don't feed my shit, I won't be mad. I'm still sorta pissed at you that you called one of our Catastrophic verse's bad rhyming or w/e when we rhymed the entire bar for a whole verse and you said we needed more internal rhymes... I kinda stopped taking you seriously at that point, if we're being honest right now.

Do your thing, no one's stopping you.

[J.R.]

Then you were biased coming into this whole damned thing. You couldn't of taken this lightly if you fuckin' tried man. That's like you going into three of my pieces, not reading them, saying I can't rhyme worth a shit, then dissing me and expecting me not to be upset about it.


And to be honest, don't know how long ago that was, but I can't find it. Maybe it was relatively recent. But link me.