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Re: Mirror

Postby Mr.DGAF » Jul 25th, '13, 02:30

Tbh, I almost missed the mirrored response. It took a few reads. I knew I had heard that opening scheme before hahaha.
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Re: Mirror

Postby Spyder » Jul 25th, '13, 02:42

Shots at slik, should battle tbh. Good to see you writing again
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Re: Mirror

Postby Sam. » Jul 25th, '13, 21:02

Did Newton's Apple prompt you to post here again? lol

The very 1st line gave it away, but Geno's post made it more clear. This is a decent diss. But you saying 'This isn't really a good diss' is maybe right from the overall battling perspective, but creatively this is fabulous stuff. It seems easy reciprocating someones else's rhymes, but keeping it relevant and still keeping your originality is hard. But you did it. It's a good response, but not the response I expected.
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Re: Mirror

Postby Sam. » Jul 25th, '13, 21:33

Post it. I'd like to read it. :P
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Re: Mirror

Postby Sam. » Jul 25th, '13, 21:40

Ah, so it's like a trump card? Let's see.. :shifty:
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Re: Mirror

Postby SliK » Jul 26th, '13, 04:57

Menzo wrote:
Sam. wrote:Post it. I'd like to read it. :P


Maybe if Slik provokes me :shifty:

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Re: Mirror

Postby Eedee » Jul 28th, '13, 02:37

Crazy writing dude.
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Re: Mirror

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Aug 8th, '13, 05:53

Menzo wrote:
Not good enough to release anything yet :)


Bullshit! :shifty: I liked this though, your rhyme schemes and flow's still as solid as I remember back when I used to post often here, and I noticed that your multies are a lot more natural. Now, imo, the only thing I was curious about was this part: "You're beggin' me to diss you, this Aussie is sad / Look at your style, bro, it's been copied intact". Was the meaning supposed to be how it's been copied in full? Cause I thought you were gonna use "in fact" instead of intact so it lead into the next bar. But that's just me lol. Still think it's dope. Keep at it! (And I wanna hear you record doe. I never heard you once lmao.)
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Re: Mirror

Postby Francesco » Aug 9th, '13, 08:58

Well done Menzo... :y: Keep that up!
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Re: Mirror

Postby Halftongue Dre » Aug 12th, '13, 06:02

Great stuff Menzo, keep writing my dude. Nice rhyming. Intriguing. I like it..
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Re: Mirror

Postby SliK » Aug 12th, '13, 08:52

De'anumb Halftongue wrote:Great stuff Menzo, keep writing my dude. Nice rhyming. Intriguing. I like it..

The original was better :sweating:
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Re: Mirror

Postby Francesco » Aug 13th, '13, 11:06

Anytime Menzo... :y:
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