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PAINKILLER - Control TR (Rolly Response)

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Re: PAINKILLER - Control TR (Rolly Response)

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Aug 16th, '13, 06:40

Eedee wrote:Fuck.

What's up brother
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Re: PAINKILLER - Control TR (Rolly Response)

Postby Eedee » Aug 16th, '13, 06:41

I'ma have to respond to all this. My name's been dropped twice.
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Re: PAINKILLER - Control TR (Rolly Response)

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Aug 16th, '13, 06:42

Eedee wrote:I'ma have to respond to all this. My name's been dropped twice.

Hit me with your best shot.


Just Silver wrote:the flow inthe beginning was rough and the screaming part didnt help lol after the first name drop which is me lol it picks up

the other parts that arent name dropping it sounds like u point fun at cole stans and ye which i liked that art line

if there was more wordplay with members names it couldve been an improvement but obviously it was just a fun piece

didnt know u won 3 battles either :o

Yeah I got 3 W's under my belt, I finna retire from battle rapping though. Thanks for the feed.
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Re: PAINKILLER - Control TR (Rolly Response)

Postby SajN » Aug 18th, '13, 01:59

PAINKILLƎR wrote:So fuuuuuuuuuuuuuck yooooou biiiiiiiiitch!!!!!
Yo, suuuuuuuuuuuuuuck 2 diiiiiiiiiiiicks!!!!!
and I'll be like Em and scream all the fuck I want
And won't fucking stop till silver gets a job

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Some other good and funny lines too. I liked this piece :y:
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Re: PAINKILLER - Control TR (Rolly Response)

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Aug 18th, '13, 02:09

SajN wrote:
PAINKILLƎR wrote:So fuuuuuuuuuuuuuck yooooou biiiiiiiiitch!!!!!
Yo, suuuuuuuuuuuuuuck 2 diiiiiiiiiiiicks!!!!!
and I'll be like Em and scream all the fuck I want
And won't fucking stop till silver gets a job

:laughing:


Some other good and funny lines too. I liked this piece :y:

Haha awesome thanks, glad you liked it.
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