"The Graffiti Artist" ....to the next level writer

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sick as fuck , really great , if you could spit it itd be real talent

[4D]

I agree with Plaspp, it is more like a street poem, it's just pure lyrical class. Doesn`t have to be a rap in me eyes!!

@namix, I see your point, but, then you could have people battling with rhymes that they wrote ages ago, or even used before on someone else. I don`t think one reference to a battlers name in a verse would come across as corny, or played out. Would still leave plenty of room for other types of wordplay and punchlines. It's just basically to prove it's you that is writing the verses.

[C-Game]

I agree with Plaspp, it is more like a street poem, it's just pure lyrical class. Doesn`t have to be a rap in me eyes!!

@namix, I see your point, but, then you could have people battling with rhymes that they wrote ages ago, or even used before on someone else. I don`t think one reference to a battlers name in a verse would come across as corny, or played out. Would still leave plenty of room for other types of wordplay and punchlines. It's just basically to prove it's you that is writing the verses.

yea
namix i think u shld do some battles here if u hv ur time
wld like to battle u aftr da tourney and see u battle

and i agree with fordie
u can do a nameplay and do punch with it as well
lets c da outcome

[namix]

Yea, you fella's who speculated that this was more of a 'street poem' are right -- I wrote it for a topical tournament a while back... the bars would need to be trimmed down considerably to ride it on any even relatively complex beat....


To the 'personal' point - I definitely see where you guys are coming from, I just feel like anyone that wants to bite or recycle gets away with it more often than not - but it'll catch up to them in the end... i absolutely see the value in an individual dropping some personals - and I believe it differentiates their drop from the next guy's, I just suggested not 'enforcing' it.... something will not smell right to you guys if some average dude starts dropping hot spontaneously -- or if something wreaks of recycling/played out....

I think it is definitely good to have a name flip or 2 in there, i just personally wouldn't enforce it... again, I am a wordplay head at heart, so I am trying to be unbias...

Anyway - thanks for peeping ya'll... i will drop somethin in the near future, maybe post a wordplay drop for those interested...

stay up,

-namix

[sinemm]

wow thats good alot..im kinda late this topic i guess but liked it alot
at first i thought its too long i cant read all but did good job..congratz

[4D]

Yea, you fella's who speculated that this was more of a 'street poem' are right -- I wrote it for a topical tournament a while back... the bars would need to be trimmed down considerably to ride it on any even relatively complex beat....


To the 'personal' point - I definitely see where you guys are coming from, I just feel like anyone that wants to bite or recycle gets away with it more often than not - but it'll catch up to them in the end... i absolutely see the value in an individual dropping some personals - and I believe it differentiates their drop from the next guy's, I just suggested not 'enforcing' it.... something will not smell right to you guys if some average dude starts dropping hot spontaneously -- or if something wreaks of recycling/played out....

I think it is definitely good to have a name flip or 2 in there, i just personally wouldn't enforce it... again, I am a wordplay head at heart, so I am trying to be unbias...

Anyway - thanks for peeping ya'll... i will drop somethin in the near future, maybe post a wordplay drop for those interested...

stay up,

-namix

That'd be cool man, I look forward to more of your rhymes.

[4D]

nice stuff thr man

any way fordie wats da deal with V-Dogg

Found it, this was V-Dog.

http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?t=3219&postdays=0&postorder=asc&start=0

[namix]

fucking sick man, personally I dont see it as rap but more like a street poem, its a kinda style ive never seen before and its fuckin hot ill tell you that much. Keep it up

word up brotha - 100% - it was def. more of a street poem (text / topical) than anything else.



YEARS latent in my response lol, but i just rediscovered this thread in google when i was tryna investigate someone who was pretending to be me elsewhere lol - so pardon the delay yo

stay up trshady.com

[namix]

crazy btw, i didn't even notice the whole page 2 here and the fact that i already conversed back and forth with a bunch of a heads

what a i throw back.... I really should have come around here more often... it's only too late to say never though i suppose.

pc fellas