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Postby Enimee » Oct 17th, '07, 18:48

u tryna say i have no audio skills bar? lol ok well when i get home ill be sure to lay down vocals cuz the only reasy that was even half nice was cuz i sed it before i wrote it that wasnt even 100% bro




ne who any more feed back no pros or cons?
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Postby C-Game » Oct 17th, '07, 19:21

nuttin bad to say here man
i hv seen u evolve in writin since day one here on TR..
this is by far ur best work..
keep it up..
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Oct 17th, '07, 23:11

Enimee wrote:u tryna say i have no audio skills bar? lol ok well when i get home ill be sure to lay down vocals cuz the only reasy that was even half nice was cuz i sed it before i wrote it that wasnt even 100% bro




ne who any more feed back no pros or cons?


not trying to say anything, i am saying that if you flowed this verse in a track with sick delivery that it would be sick as fuck, and i dont think you will audio this verse...coz you dont do audio, and i think thats a shame
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Postby Enimee » Oct 18th, '07, 02:50

only because when i do do aduio the quality is ass and i just get insecure my mic is shyt and i cant mix not exactly perfect situation for audio compisition i do real live audio all the time though bro thats how i make my bread and butter
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Postby 4D » Oct 18th, '07, 13:34

I definitely thought it was the best i've seen from you man, great flow and it just has a freedom to it or something like you were going with the flow. I find a lot of the replies gross exaggerations though man, I didn't see anything jaw-droppingly amazing about it to be totally honest, although I did like it a lot and would definitely say you are obviously improving a lot on the evidence of this! :y:

Keep up the good work man!
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Postby Enimee » Oct 18th, '07, 15:01

thanks 4d i appreciate that and thanks 2 u too cgame...but 4d i truly appreciate that sayin as most of ur previous comments about my lyrics have been....well....thanks
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Postby 4D » Oct 18th, '07, 22:59

Enimee wrote:thanks 4d i appreciate that and thanks 2 u too cgame...but 4d i truly appreciate that sayin as most of ur previous comments about my lyrics have been....well....thanks


Lol, well don't take it personal I just judge each drop as I see them, there's no bias or descrimnation when I say a verse is shit or brilliant. Only times I remember being negative towards you in the past was about your attitude or something, but even that was probably more me being in a bad mood, than you being an asshole. :D
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Postby Tash8 » Oct 18th, '07, 23:08

4D wrote:
Enimee wrote:thanks 4d i appreciate that and thanks 2 u too cgame...but 4d i truly appreciate that sayin as most of ur previous comments about my lyrics have been....well....thanks


stop complaining, your lyrics have always been shit, till this one which was just a step up


so that's what you meant 4d?
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Postby 4D » Oct 18th, '07, 23:16

Tash8 wrote:
4D wrote:
Enimee wrote:thanks 4d i appreciate that and thanks 2 u too cgame...but 4d i truly appreciate that sayin as most of ur previous comments about my lyrics have been....well....thanks


stop complaining, your lyrics have always been shit, till this one which was just a step up


so that's what you meant 4d?



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Postby Enimee » Oct 19th, '07, 08:57

heh ite tash i got chu
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Postby BigBoss » May 4th, '11, 23:18

sucks
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Postby classthe_king » May 5th, '11, 02:49

wat
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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