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Cauze And Effect'z + Bonus

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Re: Cauze And Effect'z + Bonus

Postby Xray » Sep 13th, '10, 19:00

Slic wrote:(Verse)
Beep beep is the sound of the heart module
His name's Scott, one of the kids shot at school
The type of kid to stare away and not talk to you
And when Torey said hey, that's what he'd often do


LMFAO. Car go beep beep? No really though, that's def Scott.

Cool story bro. :thumbsup2:
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Over a billion Muslims, you could never stop Islam
Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam
I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone


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Re: Cauze And Effect'z + Bonus

Postby Solace » Sep 13th, '10, 22:04

I read the bonus and I loved it. You're not banned yet?
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Re: Cauze And Effect'z + Bonus

Postby Edge » Sep 16th, '10, 00:28

good shit man.... good story telling and imagry
be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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Re: Cauze And Effect'z + Bonus

Postby Ka0t1c » Sep 16th, '10, 00:34

very amazing, good style, keep dropping verses! i'll be checking em out :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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