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Re: Geno ft. Wreck - Everywhere I Go

Postby Eedee » Jul 25th, '12, 07:22

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Eedee wrote:@ Wreck :laughing: Holy fuck, it never occurred to be that "semi" was the gun. I was thinking of the big ass rigs those fat ass McDonald's loving fucks drive... Lmfao.


Lmfao :laughing: :laughing:. I just had McDonalds today too, that's funny.


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Re: Geno ft. Wreck - Everywhere I Go

Postby Wreck » Jul 25th, '12, 07:45

Eedee wrote:
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Eedee wrote:@ Wreck :laughing: Holy fuck, it never occurred to be that "semi" was the gun. I was thinking of the big ass rigs those fat ass McDonald's loving fucks drive... Lmfao.


Lmfao :laughing: :laughing:. I just had McDonalds today too, that's funny.


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I'm not really. Roflcopter to maximum altitude. Roflroflrofl


lol I'm not offended, just saying.
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Re: Geno ft. Wreck - Everywhere I Go

Postby Sam. » Jul 25th, '12, 23:22

People complaining about Wrecks structure should now, that, he did it for the flow. He starts of slow, spitting fewer syllables and then paces his flow. I'm just guessing, I flowed it with "Should Have Known - Atmosphere" and it flowed perfectly. So. it's obvious his structure would be like that.
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Re: Geno ft. Wreck - Everywhere I Go

Postby Wreck » Jul 25th, '12, 23:35

Sam. wrote:People complaining about Wrecks structure should now, that, he did it for the flow. He starts of slow, spitting fewer syllables and then paces his flow. I'm just guessing, I flowed it with "Should Have Known - Atmosphere" and it flowed perfectly. So. it's obvious his structure would be like that.


Exactly, that's the way I intended for it to be structured too, thanks for helping clarify that :y:.
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Re: Geno ft. Wreck - Everywhere I Go

Postby Sam. » Jul 25th, '12, 23:46

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Sam. wrote:People complaining about Wrecks structure should now, that, he did it for the flow. He starts of slow, spitting fewer syllables and then paces his flow. I'm just guessing, I flowed it with "Should Have Known - Atmosphere" and it flowed perfectly. So. it's obvious his structure would be like that.


Exactly, that's the way I intended for it to be structured too, thanks for helping clarify that :y:.

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Re: Geno ft. Wreck - Everywhere I Go

Postby Wreck » Jul 26th, '12, 00:56

Sam. wrote:
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Sam. wrote:People complaining about Wrecks structure should now, that, he did it for the flow. He starts of slow, spitting fewer syllables and then paces his flow. I'm just guessing, I flowed it with "Should Have Known - Atmosphere" and it flowed perfectly. So. it's obvious his structure would be like that.


Exactly, that's the way I intended for it to be structured too, thanks for helping clarify that :y:.

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Nah, I caught that the minute I started feeding it. Even I was gonna bitch about it, then this song struck me, the I was like: Wait a minute, let me flow like this, and it worked.


lol if you wanna say that, sure.

& yeah exactly. That's the biggest thing, or at least one of them, that people don't realize, or play around with when they read a songs lyrics, you gotta play around with different flows, & see how I orchestrated it to the beat. The beat makes it easier to comprehend it, but like you noted, & I said before, I started the flow off slow, & built it up :y:.
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Re: Geno ft. Wreck - Everywhere I Go

Postby Wreck » Jul 27th, '12, 07:41

Geno wrote:Bump for more feed.


Word, this is slept on, like tempurpedic beds.
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Re: Geno ft. Wreck - Everywhere I Go

Postby Mr.DGAF » Jul 27th, '12, 08:43

3 pages of pure sleeping...
You'd be surprised...
How many truths you can hide in flows

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Re: Geno ft. Wreck - Everywhere I Go

Postby Wreck » Jul 27th, '12, 08:46

Mr.DGAF wrote:3 pages of pure sleeping...


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Re: Geno ft. Wreck - Everywhere I Go

Postby Eedee » Jul 27th, '12, 08:50

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Mr.DGAF wrote:3 pages of pure sleeping...


:happy:


Yup, no kidding. You got 5 feeds. That's about twice as many as the average drop in CW gets.

Maybe if you feed others, others will feed you. ;)
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Re: Geno ft. Wreck - Everywhere I Go

Postby Wreck » Jul 27th, '12, 08:57

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Mr.DGAF wrote:3 pages of pure sleeping...


:happy:


Yup, no kidding. You got 5 feeds. That's about twice as many as the average drop in CW gets.

Maybe if you feed others, others will feed you. ;)


I do all the time? & yeah I know, I wasn't really trying to be cocky there, just joking around, & yeah, this section's fuckin dead. We need more writers on this forum. Too many good ones atm getting little feed, but in this case, 5 feeds is pretty good.
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Re: Geno ft. Wreck - Everywhere I Go

Postby Eedee » Jul 27th, '12, 09:08

^ You do it all the time? Really? I just dropped 8 tracks in the course of week and you haven't fed a single one of them. I feed every new drop I see, and if I don't get to one, I always make sure to get to it. Like your "I've Told Myself". I've been busy doing this tourney with DGAF that I haven't fed it yet. I'm gonna do that right after I type the rest of this post out.

I'm looking at CW and it seems like you only feed when you need to drop a piece and you need a link of feed. That's very... lame, for lack of a better word, if you want feed. Feed others if you want feed. Don't complain about not getting fed if you yourself don't put the time in to feed other pieces. It may sound harsh but it's the truth.

Just sayin'.
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Re: Geno ft. Wreck - Everywhere I Go

Postby Wreck » Jul 27th, '12, 09:42

Eedee wrote:^ You do it all the time? Really? I just dropped 8 tracks in the course of week and you haven't fed a single one of them. I feed every new drop I see, and if I don't get to one, I always make sure to get to it. Like your "I've Told Myself". I've been busy doing this tourney with DGAF that I haven't fed it yet. I'm gonna do that right after I type the rest of this post out.

I'm looking at CW and it seems like you only feed when you need to drop a piece and you need a link of feed. That's very... lame, for lack of a better word, if you want feed. Feed others if you want feed. Don't complain about not getting fed if you yourself don't put the time in to feed other pieces. It may sound harsh but it's the truth.

Just sayin'.


Fair enough, you're right in this instance, I will be sure to feed more, especially your shit cause I liked some of your previous work on here from before.
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Re: Geno ft. Wreck - Everywhere I Go

Postby Eedee » Jul 27th, '12, 09:48

If you want to feed my shit, go right ahead. I'm thinking more of the new guys in here like gummybur and Twisted Fate. It's not fair to them to work their ass off on a piece and all they want is some honest criticism so they get better but instead it gets slept on, ya know?

It doesn't matter to me if you feed my shit, it would be great to get feed, don't get me wrong, but I'm just saying that it helps the new writers get better if they get fed.
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Re: Geno ft. Wreck - Everywhere I Go

Postby Wreck » Jul 27th, '12, 10:00

Eedee wrote:If you want to feed my shit, go right ahead. I'm thinking more of the new guys in here like gummybur and Twisted Fate. It's not fair to them to work their ass off on a piece and all they want is some honest criticism so they get better but instead it gets slept on, ya know?

It doesn't matter to me if you feed my shit, it would be great to get feed, don't get me wrong, but I'm just saying that it helps the new writers get better if they get fed.


Yeah definitely, I'll feed everyone's, no TR writer left behind. & yeah, I understand your point :y:.
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