720 Ft. Geno [2418 EP, Track 7]

[Blu]

First off, I know you don't read a lot of shit in here. Maybe 2% of it, if that. Secondly, the other aspects of the game? I'm a textcee at the moment, like you said, and that is mainly for three reasons. One, I don't have the mixing capabilites, two, I'm only 16. This is a hobby. I have a lot of other shit to focus on. Now, that doesn't mean I don't want to get better, (and you never knew if I did, because you'd never follow me, nor did you tell me exactly what to improve upon besides "boring", just that you disliked the piece and then bitched about the same old shit in the section) it just means that right now I don't have the time nor the equipment to get in to recording or being good at it. So I stick to this to get better.

Read what I said to Insane, I don't want to have to tell you how to improve, it's something you learn on your own. I don't wanna have to tell you to focus more on wordplay or something because it just might not be your thing.

Secondly, what do you know exactly? Why are we taking advice from you? I'm not butthurt, really. I honestly respect you, every poster of this forum, and anyone with opinions on my piece. But like Geno said, you never post in here. I'd consider you a bit more credible if you dropped something..fed something that wasn't in new posts lmao.

I've contributed to this section before. I've dropped writtens. It's whiny butthurts like you that make me stay away from this place. Me never posting in here has nothing to do with my criticism. It's like saying that you shouldn't be allowed to criticize the Mona Lisa if you can't paint it yourself.

Lastly, we have been trying to apply stuff. This has storytelling, flow, multis, etc. Yet you say everyone in here is just multis galore. No. If everyone was multis galore in this section, it'd be a bunch of fucking shit lyrical pieces that didn't make sense. Something I've always been fuckin' terrible at, I love storytelling, content, and flow. It was my marquee when I came onto this site, but you wouldn't know, would you?

Copying Eminem's "Kim" format and beat isn't really all that ground-breaking and creative. I understand you're telling a story, but you really copied the same aspects from Eminem's song. Spyder made a song some time ago that was nearly IDENTICAL to Em's "My Darling" and people were criticizing him for mirroring the song. Most of the time, it is just Multi's Galore, Man1x even said it himself. And no, I wouldn't know considering I don't really care about you and your writtens lol.

Also, reply seriously or get the fuck out. I don't want a joke reply.

Why were you expecting a joke reply? You're gonna bitch at me, so I'll bitch at you back lol. In fact, where in this thread have I replied with a joke? Yeah... exactly.

[Eedee]

There hardly is ever just random multi tracks...Geno and I have a continuing theme of storytelling, DGAF and Eedee are always dropping something very conceptual - Hell, recently our groups intertwined with Geno and Eedee writing a conceptual storytelling track.

It's far from "multies galore" unless you mean, "Conceptually creative accompanied with multies galore".

This.

This section is filled with conceptual tracks, not just people dropping "multies galore" for the fuck of it (which isn't a bad thing time to time).

[Eedee]

I don't even remember the last time I just rhymed for the hell of it.

When was the last time you jerked off?

[Eedee]

This is why I post on this forum.

[Blu]

There hardly is ever just random multi tracks...Geno and I have a continuing theme of storytelling, DGAF and Eedee are always dropping something very conceptual - Hell, recently our groups intertwined with Geno and Eedee writing a conceptual storytelling track.

It's far from "multies galore" unless you mean, "Conceptually creative accompanied with multies galore".

Link me then... most of the time it's just a copy of Em's old work.

[EvryOnesACrtc]

Tbh I haven't really seen a single creative piece in this section yet.

Not even my 'Insecurities' piece, which you complimented?

For the people that are curious as to what piece I'm talking about, it can be found here:

viewtopic.php?f=24&t=147908 Plug, plug

[J.R.]

There hardly is ever just random multi tracks...Geno and I have a continuing theme of storytelling, DGAF and Eedee are always dropping something very conceptual - Hell, recently our groups intertwined with Geno and Eedee writing a conceptual storytelling track.

It's far from "multies galore" unless you mean, "Conceptually creative accompanied with multies galore".

Link me then... most of the time it's just a copy of Em's old work.

Nobody here does that. Just because JR chose Kim for this track doesn't mean it copies Em.

Here:

Crossing Paths
The Roast

Just because you said that,
viewtopic.php?f=24&t=148107

Adding on with my own material (it is my thread, gotta plug the merch, as john cena would say )

Completely original topic? check.
Multis? Check.
storytelling? Check.
Flow? Check.
Etc.

We win.

Thanks for the feed guys, btw. Geno, lock this up please. I don't want anymore bitching. If he does it on anymore of my drops with no actual feed claiming "You should figure out how to get better.." well that's dumb, I can't figure out what I did wrong. I need guidance. thats why people post there pieces.

[Blu]

Completely original topic? check.
Multis? Check.
storytelling? Check.
Flow? Check.
Etc.

I read the first two lines of that written you just now posted and I gotta say it wasn't original at all. You were obviously moping at the time and decided to try and "help" other writers, probably even described how it felt being in that place. I don't know, I didn't bother reading the thing.

Storytelling? How was any of that storytelling? Probably the shittiest storytelling I've ever read...there is no plot, characters, conflict, absolutely nothing that makes up a story.

I don't really give a damn about your precious multi's, but I'll agree on the flow.

Good day sir.