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Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby Element. » Jul 19th, '10, 07:25

Robot wrote:
gutawafang wrote:Nobody disses my homie. :angry:

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:)

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Thanks for the feed
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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby gutawafang » Jul 19th, '10, 07:30

^ Eh, I'm sure I didn't feed. :unsure:

Well, to me it didnt come out strong as a diss. It had personals but wasn't strong personals.
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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby Element. » Jul 19th, '10, 07:32

gutawafang wrote:^ Eh, I'm sure I didn't feed. :unsure:

Well, to me it didnt come out strong as a diss. It had personals but wasn't strong personals.


Yeah, i rushed it anyway i was bored and had nothin better to do :happy:
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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby gutawafang » Jul 19th, '10, 07:34

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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby Robot » Jul 21st, '10, 01:26

Bitch, suck a dick then go diss yourself for destroying the human culture.

That's my feedback, also, gay name title please change.
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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby neversnooze » Jul 21st, '10, 21:40

it was simple and flowed , good wordplay on his name robot/blow bot. :wave:
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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby Element. » Jul 21st, '10, 21:52

neversnooze wrote:it was simple and flowed , good wordplay on his name robot/blow bot. :wave:


Haha yeh thanks :happy:


@Robot dude i dont diss myself now go write some shit thats worth reading :coffee:
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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Jul 23rd, '10, 08:53

lol blowbot

@robot, element is right....

it was pretty simple, but i still liked it
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Re: Element - Babys Fun (Robot Diss)

Postby Element. » Jul 23rd, '10, 23:34

bullet_boy46 wrote:lol blowbot

@robot, element is right....

it was pretty simple, but i still liked it



Yeh i know it was lol and thanks anyways
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