Bringing you down

[gutawafang]

kids in the playground, tied you up, and swinging you clowns
this is how they physically hurt you, they bringing you down
so down underground, bring you down to the deepest of hell
sleepless in fact, and the fucking biggest deal is you fell
come on son, this ain't the time to hold your head up high
cuz I'ma flip your every word, and I'll evaporate them dry
go ahead and try, with every song I penetrate your lies
till you can't sit with your legs crossed, you're dead tonight
I said I'ma flip you, bring you down like a Black Hawk
fucking punks trying to rap but sound like some wack talk
with pussy lyrics, soft and wet, disappoint even crap cock
sfucking dicks they run away, at the sight of a packed glock
get this fact dawg, I'm bringing you down with nuclear words
forming verses that motherfucking punks like you hear hurts
I brought you down, fellas, now your heart must be sinking
stand back up, clear your mind and start with your thinking

[Yah-hah]

Damn guta its about time I see some shit from you. I'm diggin the feel of it. I like how it started out. like how it finished good rhymes man I thought you were dead lol

[Mr. Chambers]

link of feedback?

[Fa-Q]

Multies like a goddamn maniac...yeah time fro you to frop for, young man

[J Roc]

That was sick gutta ma son ....... I see improvent + potential haha

[Mr. Chambers]

locked for no link.