Take Me Away

[Xray]

1st verse to this new song I'm working on.

It seems like I've been gone for a while
When things change the walls chain your smile
In a aisle of vile, pile of people on tiles
A trial to test you, I dial for rescue
No one to arrest you, seems like it's silent
till it's night and violent, waiting to rest you
Wake up to residue, everybodies dead but you
Watch they coming for you
I told god if this mallard don't sord
Then a ballad of odd will valid this sword
I feel I can die but these vines are stuck
Life in the tub, short as fuck if luck could tuck
I wouldn't have to climb so much, tired of us
This fake love so sus it just smiles at us
It's wild but tough, mild enough
Sealed and shut, afraid to touch

Feed

[macdaddy019967]

very emotional piece here
though your flow is always on point my niigga
nice shit

just make sure not to get too emotional and start growing woman parts
j/k lmao

[Bistnal]

lol My first thought when I saw this was the Royce song.
But I like it. Love the imagery you used in it, nice job. Felt like it was morbid, but in spite of it (or because of it? lol) I could really feel the emotion behind it.

[gutawafang]

I remember seeing the few lines somewhere. The flow is always good man. And man, sick visualization.

[Xray]

Thanks guys.

[Fa-Q]

damn ray, this is gonna be good....make sure you share the final piece

[mcZu]

Not your usual style, doesn't mean it's bad, though. As a textual piece it's not bad, above average. Your delivery and flow will probably make up for it when you record it.

[Xray]

Audio if you wanna peep.

viewtopic.php?f=38&t=100487

[J Roc]

Jesus , That Was Nice Bro. Wasn't Sure if u Could Pull Off Multies But U Sure Showed Me haha

i'll look at the audio soon.