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Lil thing i wrote

Postby Mahmoud48 » Nov 6th, '10, 20:59

im not good and i dont claim to be near good
im still practicing

my style is written
never bitten
puttin any rappers in submission
when i enter the room u feel tension
so dense that it frightens
any who decree them selves as a great mc
will agree i took there spot
taking the throne
never going home
not going back the old days
im changing my ways
its time to kill it
like a fillet fish on the skillet
i reeling ya in
with my mad skills
being the bait
guess u can say im a master at it
i got ta master bait( see that word play)
ODD FUTURE ASAP OVOXO BLACK HIPPY GOOD MUSIC
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Re: Lil thing i wrote

Postby classthe_king » Nov 6th, '10, 21:01

You're going to need to leave feedback or Chambers will lock it
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Lil thing i wrote

Postby Mahmoud48 » Nov 6th, '10, 21:03

classthe_king wrote:You're going to need to leave feedback or Chambers will lock it

what does that mean??
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Re: Lil thing i wrote

Postby Mr. Chambers » Nov 8th, '10, 19:14

give feedback to someone and post the link in here...
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so much WIN!
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