Lord

[WakeUpShow]

More of a poem than a rap.


I feel the Lord in my soul but I can't get a grasp,
on the fact that he's there guiding my every task.
Atheists try to persuade me that he doesn't exist,
But i know In this story, God is the narrator and i'm the twist.

Maybe it's my lifestyle I'm afraid to let go,
Everything in excess, when it rains I want snow.
I keep telling myself to fall on my knees and just pray,
But I'm a hotel in which these demons insist that they stay.
Lust, Anger, and Selfishness are so hard to push away

I lay down to sleep only to let my thoughts wander,
About all these gifts from God that I've squandered.
All the love in this world shows me there's a god,
But all the hatred and the murder try to convince me that there's not.

I'm sure the Lord feels rejected as I push away his love,
He died for me, only to get ignored with a shove.
The spirit creeps inside for a moment, and I see the light,
but the worlds many distractions distract me from what is right

I want to walk with Jesus before Satan takes my hand,
I'd do anything for that treasure even buy the entire land.



For those confused about the last bar: http://www.biblegateway.com/passage/?search=Matthew+13%3A44-49&version=NIV

http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=101771&p=1399076#p1399076

[gutawafang]

Relevance max. Nice. Full marks bro if this is a literature exam.

[WakeUpShow]

Relevance max. Nice. Full marks bro if this is a literature exam.

hahah whats Relevance max? and nah it isn't a lit. project, though i could use a 100 to bring my grades up

[gutawafang]

Relevance max. Nice. Full marks bro if this is a literature exam.

hahah whats Relevance max? and nah it isn't a lit. project, though i could use a 100 to bring my grades up

Oops. Sorry I accidentally used my poor english. I mean, its relevance is tops.

[WakeUpShow]

Relevance max. Nice. Full marks bro if this is a literature exam.

hahah whats Relevance max? and nah it isn't a lit. project, though i could use a 100 to bring my grades up

Oops. Sorry I accidentally used my poor english. I mean, its relevance is tops.

thanks alot

[remy3x]

I really like the second and the third part. The first and the fourth just don't seem as smooth. And I'm not sure if smooth is the right word
Nice ending, too.

[WakeUpShow]

I really like the second and the third part. The first and the fourth just don't seem as smooth. And I'm not sure if smooth is the right word
Nice ending, too.

thanks for the feedback

[WakeUpShow]

bump

[WakeUpShow]

Yeah, more of a poem than a rap.

Still good though. I see you took my advice and shortened your lines. Flows ways better, doesn't it?

Mind feeding mine?

yes, thanks alot. i see the benefits!