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keystyle 101

Postby Sir_Machete' » Nov 16th, '10, 20:46

some of my audio flow type of shit>>


Listen

Im'a spray foolish,
Cuz my shots harder then any human made bullet.
Never take students,
Teaching all the kids how to blaze stupid.
1 ON 1 let's remain ruthless,
Have all they're PRINCIPLES stay clueless.
I can't stand cunts,
Hataz get sat on like tampons.
Am i really flowin'??
Or silly posting with my cities spokesmen?
Fuck a shitty bonus,
Here's another one of those silly omens.
I pack heaters,
& bash beavers like a dam flow got stacked deeper.
My raps ether,
& known to hash creepers like accidents from gas seekers.
I'm big stromy,
Drink 40's like old men did before me.
Mix between king gordy,
& That kid shorty when i rock hoes like a mosh pit orgy!!



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Re: keystyle 101

Postby Slim's Shady » Nov 17th, '10, 01:56

I liked the flow on this shit, definitely the 2nd best thing of this. The multis on the 2nd half of this were top-notch. Same with the rhyme scheme and the lyrical content kept me amused.

It was good but it started off kind of slow but eventually it picked up and it was amazing.

Overall 8.5/10 (if it started quality-wise the same than at the 2nd half it would have easily been a 9 or more)

Keep writing and posting :y:
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Re: keystyle 101

Postby Sir_Machete' » Nov 17th, '10, 02:01

Good lookin' out homie, yeah i was just having fun i got more serious around the last few bars lol. AND no doubt im'a keep coming up with some more drops :y:
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