haha that was nice
i like how the rhymes were simple but they kept the flow constant!
Best part was that you kept to a topic, which is pretty important in any verse
keep it up brotha!
Fast Verse I did
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Re: Fast Verse I did
by Arabian Shady » Nov 22nd, '10, 14:27
ArAbIaN ShAdY
We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady
FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady
FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
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Re: Fast Verse I did
by MikeNUFC » Nov 22nd, '10, 18:18
Good content, flow felt kind of messy at times.
That seemed a bit cliche and the last rhyme was kinda forced
Overall it was okay, though.
as long as it's pure not aimed for faim n wealth
That seemed a bit cliche and the last rhyme was kinda forced
Overall it was okay, though.
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