Quick Drop

[Enimee]

im sitten here chillin just me and my pad,
communicatin lyrically with thoughts i never had,
thinkin bout the way the games changed, gettin sad
so ive decided to flip this bitch, no acrobats
cause i was born with a purpose
to let the truth ring out in my literary verses
yall dudes are litarlly worthless
talking like some thugs, walkin round rockin purses
that aint hip, so i suggest yall hop
off the tip, of my cock . shit i got,
flow for days spittin with roller coaster pace
but i been bullshittin so gimme a second to be honest
and stop this nonsense,
bickerin over whos sucks and whos the hottest
point blank period, there aint a guy alive
who can see me with the rhymes
so i put a shot into my mind,
just so i could meet big and pac in the sky
no bull dog i battled doods right in front of god
and even he was like, yeah, this white boi is live
and i was DEAD AT THE TIME


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[Arabian Shady]

haha that was sweet man, been a long time since i seen you drop
everything ayte outside trland?
keep writing!

[Enimee]

preciate the feed,
yeah life has its ups and downs i plan to be around more though jus got a new laptop soo yeah

thanks again bro

[BILI]

This was nice for a quick drop man.
Some nice rhymes,it also flowed really good(only place where its messed is that "off the tip line")

This was my fav part:

so ive decided to flip this bitch, no acrobats
cause i was born with a purpose
to let the truth ring out in my literary verses
yall dudes are litarlly worthless

And dont forget to put a link to some feedback

[Enimee]

werd man, preciate the feed and thanks for the heads up i forgot-eded

[Fa-Q]

Great drop, yeah I would have pointed out what BILI pointed out. Those are some good lines. keep dropping, enimee

[Sir_Machete']

not bad for a quick drop EM, bili pretty much took the typo outta my hands so co-sign to what he said.
Hope to read more drops soon

[Enimee]

bump