Okey, I know I'm not exactly amazing. But I've just been writing for less than a year, and it's something I'm going to keep doing for a long time, so I think I have some potential TBH. But I would love any feedback and anything that could help me improve. (Also, I'm only 15 years old, and Norwegian, so my english vocabulary will expand)
And also, I'm thinking about recording this. (I'll make a hook when I've got a beat)
I've been trying to produce something myself (I've downloaded FL studio), but so far it's not exactly mind blowing. It's getting better though. But if anyone else want to help me out and make me a beat or something, that would be amazing.
[Verse 1]
It seems like the media keep sacrafacing goats (G.O.A.T's)
Now they should rather kill of that fat araising Ross
And then grow some balls like Johnny fuckin' Noxville
And not like Justin Beebs, who thinks having cocks kill
Now I'm just gonna keep, cummin' in socks till
I finish my leap, yeah, fuckin Paradox'ville
People just spill what's ill, tho real skill will remain
It all got killed, when Soulja stepped into this game
Nowdays it fuckin feels like fame is just a shame
Cause it's all whack today, but man, back in the day
I could be rappin to insane, amounts of fans
But nowdays some R'nB shit's all that counts to man
[Verse 2]
Now let's solve this shit, call me Scooby fuckin Doo
Cause I'ma evolve 'till I'm more than a noob to you
I'm gonna persue it to, the day the zoo is filled
With kill'd Lil Anus'es and Nicki Minajes
Cause I can't be the only who who's sick of this grabage (nope)
And we can't help but gettin it forced down our throaths
But Nikci, yeh, I'd tap that whore without clothes
But that's as far as it goes, cause her rapping sucks
And yet's she's crapping bucks, like she's Scrooge McDuck
And then Rick Ross, who could like this huge fat fuck?
It's talented people suck, in mainstream we're a minority
Yeah, now aren't we? Fuck Pop and fuck R'nB!
So what do you think?
