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Lyrically-Lame (The Anti-Bragging Song)

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Re: Lyrically-Lame (The Anti-Bragging Song)

Postby WakeUpShow » Apr 5th, '11, 16:55

not much to say, you said it all for me...































:shifty: jk man, good stuff
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Re: Lyrically-Lame (The Anti-Bragging Song)

Postby ArsheyHaq » Apr 7th, '11, 19:30

HAHA there's some pretty funny lines in here...I just wish the lyrics and rhyming were better :zipped: it'd make it more enjoyable :unsure: but otherwise, your concepts are always really good, and I wish I'd come up with them myself!

Some lines that made me :laughing: :

"Even if a write a love song , people'll say that it's really terribly gay"

"Bitches scream when they see me but not in a good way"

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rhyming= :n:
sorry, just being honest :( oh, well..only way you'll continue to get better is keep posting and I'll always be here to provide feed and encourage :D keep it up!
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