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Re: 32 Lines

Postby Tash8 » May 18th, '11, 01:58

i really feel your writing style, you got many interwoven rhyme schemes--you don't see that often. Rhymes are very creative for the most part and cool punchlines.. none really stood out to me though besides this one:
My flow gets tighter than the goal of a pedofile,

cool, maybe a lil cliche but i dont think so cause you kinda flipped originally.

anyways good shit man, always like reading your stuff. would appreciate your feed on the end pt 2
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