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The Boy In The Bubble Lyrics (1 1/2 verses + Hook)

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The Boy In The Bubble Lyrics (1 1/2 verses + Hook)

Postby No Way Out » May 18th, '11, 10:13

Throwing some old-ish lines and lines i just thought of together for this one


Chorus: X1
Fuck a chorus im the bubble boy


Verse 1
Ask how i'm doing? bitch you should know that i'm sad
when i cut my wrists so badly i'm missing both of my hands
Dont get me started, ya'll must think my Brain Is So F'd
For showing up at my funeral after i Faked My Own Death
Callled the cops cause someone broke in, after gasping in Terror
And gave them the description of the guy that i saw in the Mirror
Selling Dewey T shirts but ain't nobody Buying Lots of Mine
So i went to XXL and told them to Try This On for Size
I Get dumped by a bitch, and front like im Barely Upset
Till i go home and start cutting pieces of Hair off my Head
Seen me in the Guinness Book? I can't use the skills i Never Had
So when i BREAK A RECORD it was probably Rebecca Black's
And I Must be the only person who Walks On This Planet
Thats doing time for sending death threats to Osama Bin Laden
Syke im Sitting Here, Drinking Beer, developing a Large Belly
And if i EVER get locked up its gonna be for pissing on R Kelly

Chorus X1

verse 2
I feel ALIENATED when i take a Glance In my Room
But i'm not a martian, just the Man on the Moon
Thats going through his childhood problems EveryDay
Cuz i live in the past, bought a house on Memory Lane
Life sucks but don't get me wrong, i Count on Tomorrow
I could fill a lake with my problems, then Drown in my Sorrow
I got kicked out of school, after they Tried Suspending Me
And its then i noticed life's a game cause mines in JEAPARDY


Imma finish it later doe. :8)


PS; My rap names Dewey Decimal for unknown reasons

PPS; Recording for my mixtape starts next week

........ Aka Darth Vader's father

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Maybe wrote:This is pretty damn good. For what it is, a simple, smooth flowing punch-line verse, it's perfect. You didn't miss a single rhyme, and the content was amusing. Good stuff man, really good.

10/10

C.R.E.A.M wrote:I thought that dude is all about trash talk and he's gonna leave the tourney in the first round.. but that was actually dangerous. :sweating:

Battle Record : 1-0
NWO, for short...

WARNING: This Cute Puppy's Got a Mean Bite ... Im Gonnna Have To Put a Sign on My Sig Or Something.
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Re: The Boy In The Bubble Lyrics (1 1/2 verses + Hook)

Postby No Way Out » May 19th, '11, 17:36

Finally got accepted and its half way down the list haha



I Ain't digging the title now that i think about it .... It'lll probably get changed :coffee:
Maybe wrote:This is pretty damn good. For what it is, a simple, smooth flowing punch-line verse, it's perfect. You didn't miss a single rhyme, and the content was amusing. Good stuff man, really good.

10/10

C.R.E.A.M wrote:I thought that dude is all about trash talk and he's gonna leave the tourney in the first round.. but that was actually dangerous. :sweating:

Battle Record : 1-0
NWO, for short...

WARNING: This Cute Puppy's Got a Mean Bite ... Im Gonnna Have To Put a Sign on My Sig Or Something.
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Re: The Boy In The Bubble Lyrics (1 1/2 verses + Hook)

Postby Yah-hah » May 20th, '11, 10:39

Yeah not sure bout the title. Your flow is carzy good these days. The memory lane line was my favorite. Keep writin that dope shit, lookin forward to the mixtape
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Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: The Boy In The Bubble Lyrics (1 1/2 verses + Hook)

Postby Slim Fiasco » May 20th, '11, 11:12

Love the memory lane line! Props.
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Re: The Boy In The Bubble Lyrics (1 1/2 verses + Hook)

Postby Spyder » May 20th, '11, 18:15

not your best but decent fam decent
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