Lifes a Dream (feedback)

[BigBoss]

I wann turn this into a full song, so any feed back will be much appreciated, I did this in about 10-15 minutes

In my heart I got a malady,
cause reality has been really been kickin the shit out of me with brutality,
and my family ain't been helpin cause in my heart all they are is a fuckin cavity,
I can't wait till I'm gone livin in my own damn isolated municipality,
livin life full of depravity's,
But untill then lifes causin me huge fuckim calamity's,
givin me a low self sense of vanity,
which is why I'm customed to a high level of profanity,
I don't see a inanity if we all just gonna die anyway what's the point of makin a life long strategy,
Hell, maybe I'll visit Italia and check out The Cinque Terre, and get a Bella Italiano donne to marry me,
but that ain't gonna happen, cause this is all just a dream