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Take From You *Response To Nollie*

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Take From You *Response To Nollie*

Postby WinstonMARX » Jun 4th, '11, 22:06

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I'm sick of every rapper with a criminal image
Advocating crime with every single sentence they're spittin
But when I pirate their song, they throw a fit and start bitchin
I practiced what they preached, so fuck your shit, I'm the victim
Listen...I know you want payment for the product
I'm a teenage kid if I had the cash, I'da went and bought it
Just stop it, cause I won't buy you ten more mansions
When I eat Ramen noodles and you're drivin a Phantom
Bitch, you should pay me just to listen to that trash
Every song's the same you're just screamin on the track
In other words...YOU'RE SO FUCKIN CHEESEY I'MA LAUGH
At every verse speakin fast, smoke screenin what you lack
(Come on bro) Bring that damn 8 Mile style back
You're music stopped in the streets like its tires flat
You dissed Mariah? You both make the same kinda crap
I just DL'd Hell the Sequel for free, I'm rewind it back
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Re: Take From You *Response To Nollie*

Postby MikeNUFC » Jun 4th, '11, 22:09

Good shit - rhyming was good, flow was adequate. Of course, I liked the content, mainly because Nollie is a moron and that song is shitty.

Bitch, you should pay me just to listen to that trash

I just DL'd Hell the Sequel for free, I'm rewind it back

^Best lines.

Funny drop.

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Re: Take From You *Response To Nollie*

Postby momentsgolden » Jun 4th, '11, 22:34

Great work dude. But that screaming shit is not really "true". Whatever rocks the track i guess
Songs of the year

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Re: Take From You *Response To Nollie*

Postby Elision » Jun 5th, '11, 09:53

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i'm comin in, drivin my short bus
with this nose i don't need a torch up
bustin through, light the industry's porsche up
comin after who didn't support us...
imma change your brain bring
every wicked bit of strange to mainstream
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Re: Take From You *Response To Nollie*

Postby 12characters » Jun 5th, '11, 10:32

Nollie wrote:Image


:laughing:
Never gets old

As for the track, it followed pretty nicely.
Those punchlines were dope as fuck too.

I'm still buying the album though :wave:
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Re: Take From You *Response To Nollie*

Postby Block » Jun 6th, '11, 04:32

oh. it's cole. asshole.
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For $5...
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