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Re: Violent

Postby ArsheyHaq » Jun 26th, '11, 03:27

I could tell this was just a throwaway rhyme for you, but I enjoyed a lot of this piece :y:

"World's sticky to the touch, I call it a shitstain
Everybody wants to be tough, I say quit playin'
They sent me here to kill your hopes and dreams of big fame"

that was pretty dope, along with the "law or cops"/"power lock" rhyme

but umm...

'These wackos jog in the center of the city, boo
Pick a fight to make em tired, and talk about their "pretty" girls'

boo and girls don't rhyme lol
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