Nightmare on Sesame Street ft. MikeNUFC & VenomBlackViper

[ArsheyHaq]

ArsheyHaq
Sesame Street, this place is a pessimist's dream!/
and today's episode is brought to you in part by the symbols "M-16"/ *gunshots*
haha we closed off all exits and possible routes/
I grabbed Oscar the Grouch and bossed HIM around!/
tossed 'em to the ground and gagged his nostrils and mouth/
then RAPED HIM! "Woah, have you lost a few pounds, Snuffleupagus?/
look at that fine ass...come here! Lemme cuff your arms and legs/
and RAPE YOU! *moans* shut up! Tough it out you bitch!/
shudda thought twice 'bout movin' here, it's a rough metropolis/
and I'm the fuckin' sign of Apocalypse!!/
hey, where you goin'? Come back! My love's monogamous"/
that's when I heard someone say "I've had enough of all this shit!"/
fuckin' Elmo hit me with an elbow/
I said "aw, hell no!" and beat the shit out 'em 'till he turned 'yellow'/
...then I RAPED HIM! Flirted with Bert and Ernie to get their name and address/
those two wanna um, "claim my package"/
well, here's a bomb in the mail *BOOM!* that's what I call flamin' faggots/

MikeNUFC
I got home from work and was locked out the house
Went to get the spare key, out jumped Oscar The Grouch
I was shocked as his mouth took a bite at my chest
So I picked up the bin lid and started slicing his neck
His fight didn't rest even though he was hurt
He called out for Kermit who rose from the dirt
He drove at me first, as I called his girl a 'fat pig'
Picked him up with ease and hurled him back in
The world went black quick as Ernie came in vicinity
But I recovered at speed and took his anal virginity
"Pain is a sin to me!" I screamed as he called out for Bert
But out came Mrs Piggy wearing the smallest of skirts
She bawled out, so hurt, "I hate it when I'm called fat!"
I pulled out my squirt and raped her gently with tact
A wrench hit my back and I turned, only Elmo to go
I strangled him:"The Muppets? To hell with that show!"

VenomBlackViper
No sweet dreams this is a Nightmare on Seasame Street
Puddles of blood on the floor & i'm right there dressed in a sheet
Had Miss Piggy worried when I flashed the heat over her
Stuck it in Big Birds mouth & blasted his beak closer
Shoved Oscar The Grouch in a fucking trash decomposer
Ripped the tusk off of Snuffleupagus & stuck it up his back, spleen & shoulders
Told Cookie Monster it's time for a diet, forced him to commit suicide
But kept screaming at him telling him to do it twice
Stabbed Grover till he was covered in blood & looked like Elmo
Saw that little shit try getting away, hit him with a hook & elbow
Crushed Elmos world in the palm of my hand
Noticed Oscar crawl out from the bottom of the trash & sawed him in half
Sensed the hunger in the Count grow, offered him the Muppet's corpses
Watched him gobble them up as he counted a hundred organs
Why do all of this? I just got evicted from my old neighborhood
My name is Mr Rogers & I was fired from a job where the pay was good




Links of feed:
ArsheyHaq-viewtopic.php?f=24&t=117278
MikeNUFC-viewtopic.php?f=24&t=116443
VenomBlackViper-viewtopic.php?f=24&t=117378&p=1680403#p1680403

[VenomBlackViper]

[EyeQ200]

That was dope guys
One of the best text songs i've seen on here in my short time here
Also, one of the few with a concept

[ArsheyHaq]

I'mma review our own piece lol

First of all, ArsheyHaq, Idk how you do it man. No subject matter seems off limits or too difficult for you to pull off ...haha jp, you suck.

Anyway, MikeNUFC, your verse is plain nuts! Every time I read it, I find new internals and longer multies that I didn't catch before. You did a really good job, especially for someone who was busy with an exam, and didn't know much about Sesame Street to begin with haha

And VenomBlackViper, everyone knows your specialties are metaphors, wordplay, and just straight up wit. Your verse showcased all that brilliantly.

"Stabbed Grover till he was covered in blood & looked like Elmo"

^^^My favorite line! So sick..^^^

Overall, I had a great time with this one. I'm glad you guys accepted to work with me This is probably the sickest collab I've seen on this board in a while, if I do say so myself. Although, I do agree with Menzo. I wanted to tell you guys that we should all go after different characters/victims on Sesame Street or continue right on from my verse (since I finished mine first), but I felt like I had already been too demanding on you guys, dropping this project on you without any notice and all. Still, it was a lot of fun, and I hope we get to work together again some time

[VenomBlackViper]

Yeah we killed this shit.

[MikeNUFC]

Cheers for the feed guyzzz

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Leave it to vbv to be in this collab. Only you fucking weirdos.

Haha, I wish I was in this... Good shit from everyone. Great imagery, rhymes, etcs. There's really no critique to give.

[Enimee]

i liked this alot, real morbid twisted funny and all that good shit, i mean in all i couldnt have asked for much more off a sesame street song and i feel u guys defnitly found a good way to turn something innocent into a nightmare lolz

the only things i can say i thought was lacking in some areas was the rushed concepts, i mean it felt like you guys all had seperate verses and didnt collab and make one whole song because in each verse it was just your own twisted take on a nightmare with the sesame street characters, whereas if you guys had incorporated a bit of eachothers verses in one anothers and made it a team effort it would have went over better in a more complete project type sense,

as far as the lyrics go, you all three were outstanding minus VBV using some of the same rhyme schemes as Arshey (elmo with elbow)

it was a very good read though, and i hope yall didnt catch anything from this mass rapage

[ArsheyHaq]

the only things i can say i thought was lacking in some areas was the rushed concepts, i mean it felt like you guys all had seperate verses and didnt collab and make one whole song because in each verse it was just your own twisted take on a nightmare with the sesame street characters, whereas if you guys had incorporated a bit of eachothers verses in one anothers and made it a team effort it would have went over better in a more complete project type sense,

First of all, I gotta say you are one of my favorite feedback-givers You always provide a lot of helpful advice, and aren't afraid to say what's what. So yeah, thanks.

As for the critique about our 3 verses not meshing well; we are definitely keeping that in mind for next time trust me.