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Mother Fuckers can not forget about Marshal

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Mother Fuckers can not forget about Marshal

Postby JawsBoof » Jul 8th, '11, 21:53

Like a submarine I submerge to the depths of the sea, I got sea urchins and anemones
Eminem his eminence eminent omens and awe men condemned trying to play wits wiz him!
Search and rescue teams deep beneath your wet feet ready ta get mean leave you exhausted then drowning!
Your dwelling in a well of my ink, souls they been sold and soul what, I been known, you reap and been sown! Pop another benzo, you bengay, double the relief for your pain!
Finish seal rhino lining even acid rain can't destroy my boat, or me rhyming!
You seem to sink in my hole a black endless bottomless poem! Add your face to my totem!
A decapitated waste space invadered my place fuck impaling your brains,
Stacked heads in columns of distaste! Toothpicks as jugular paste, toothpicks in radial veins!
By reading you signed a wave to disclaim! Digital dangs, literature slain, cause literal pain!
Viscous making scenes, reeled, like I deem, your team, to get creamed, your reamed!
Recorded fleeing the screen, green, a flash of light hope a sight of might scoped serene N I know
Your boat, does not float, you on a cloud nine of false hope, me close, your earlobe, it explodes
Mine enemies they will fold, lightning energies eels and remedies ambrosia entities, sensory me!
I command fleets like battle cruisers, your pussy juice! MY seamen comes fucking you looser!
I'm like Lucifer, contemplating evil ideas, telling you things that cause horrible nightmares!
I blaze trails hotter than Hades ladies, I'm sun baking no debating twisted like Satin and Aries hating!
Ready ta raise up like sea weed, no hesitation offenses fucking defending me, you the meat I eat! Your flesh lacerated with my teeth, razor sharp, obsidian, actually, they stay, so you must LEAVE!
Always an ending to a beginning, no happy message I'm sending, death by my verbal weapons!
I'm a street shark dark hearted with arc sparking, a quiet man harking, zip it up while I part them!
Seas I fucking art them, see me, no, where are yo, while I cart them, cargo, young, card them!
One car, one way, highway, no bike lane, no parking, can't finish, don't start then!
You got me ticked bitch quit talking, bitches flinch often, and clocked, put a sock in!
Throw punches they getting blocked, get boxed your like lunches for me----peanut butter and jelly!
Jaws----no need not ta start beef, you failed me, I put no more pardons, pull no sorrow no bargains!
Toast, bros, broast, rows, boats, brust, I got some more cheers lines for you! and the youth!
Beers time wine too, stinky cheese bre, melting your whole fucking crude!
Milking it like a boob, fools sitting back trying ta get famous for rap, watching YouTube! haHA!
Write another million rhymes before pursuit, jump out my planes of thought, pack a parachute!
However I'm going back swimming to the ocean, my delivery charges are potent,
Electrically zapping asses in my flow of motion, storms in my current coasting!
Bringing comatose potions, putting comas by commas in front and/or behind, uhn?
I got that shark attack lasers to my head attached, motion sensors and your life is rapped!
Won't drown in my sorrows I fucking fin swim and swam, I fucking dive nose no lie hose
Your suppose, not ta gloat, glow or show, boat, while I float, beneath ready ta sink your ship
Using my teeth boring holes on end, fall in I enjoy the meat raw,
Loving da feet you have and don't need! Ease up please, beware shark don't try to stomp on me!
Beat red ripped out heartless chest I got in it and devoured the love you had within bitch!
No man woman or child gonna stop me better just duck dodge and evade me, HONESTLY!
Avoid the ocean completely, don't swim, don't show, my flow, eternal glow, I ride tides bringing the high in, end highs men, my trophy, I command ships to sail like I'm the mother fucking ruler of all water Poseidon! You pussies try riding that surf board gon get divided then! As well your life again!
Don't get salty With me cause I can morph mighty from a the greatest white shark of the sea to a dangerous Godly, better believe or resurrections come farther between!
Unearthed trident titan giant killing kind men and they always dieing! I'm a bright men, rolled into one and I aint got to be done, when I win, wits end you coming from forum and at me again, uhn?

I martial arts all your status like atlas as well as an addict don't forget about Marshall Mathers
He matters your ladders get chopped out at the feet, them feet beneath your knees, you flippin backwards, I got your chitter chatter, it's on freeze, unlike this rhyme you like drop letters backwards, it aint ez to pop off and cop me believe me!
on my third eye you blind so it don't matter, all is fucking matter energy solid clatter, pitter your patter I sit on your rappers swallow em up a big butt farted a bit they suck up only a gay stuck up flame uh would sit back on that and try to call me a fucking gay lord you on gayward, your wayward
If you aint smart enough don't listen you tripping when you say turd, you way hurt, you play dirt
i play doe, soon enough anyway any how and who the day is great get a way from my say so
cause I say so, you may say what but a sphincter you are and a A hole, butt load, chod bodaggot
a silly little I'm gonna tell everyone I was molested but your a fagot! I'm just playing don't be mad at
The mad Hatter doing hat tricks I got three scores for your ass backlash and the cracked whip!
A question you can't answer bitch! Do you know what a comadomajomalamafamasonaconahona is? Yeah give me that bullshit but you don't know shit!

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Last edited by JawsBoof on Jul 12th, '11, 19:12, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Mother Fuckers can not forget about Marshal

Postby Fa-Q » Jul 8th, '11, 22:34

dude....structure
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Re: Mother Fuckers can not forget about Marshal

Postby Chet Starr » Jul 8th, '11, 22:37

structure and concept. Random bravado raps only go so far
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Re: Mother Fuckers can not forget about Marshal

Postby JawsBoof » Jul 9th, '11, 01:27

LOL Imitators you fags always crack me up! Why don't you just be the real slim shady! Oh shit you can't you even be the real you!
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Re: Mother Fuckers can not forget about Marshal

Postby M&M59 » Jul 9th, '11, 13:34

relapse :y:
And when I go to hell and I'm gettin ready to leave
I'ma put air in a bag and charge people to breathe
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Re: Mother Fuckers can not forget about Marshal

Postby WakeUpShow » Jul 9th, '11, 17:10

lolwut
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Re: Mother Fuckers can not forget about Marshal

Postby JawsBoof » Jul 10th, '11, 06:08

Random bravado, right after my lava flow, Eminem your eminence fucking out did any competitor in any genre! Put your fucking foot in your mouth when i rap that shit on track your gonna crap your fucking pants at all the multi's punch lines kick bitches, bow the fuck down, you clown ass, been cock sucking, ass fucking, Ha Ha insert foot mouths! Never forget to pay homage! To any of the greats!
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Re: Mother Fuckers can not forget about Marshal

Postby JawsBoof » Jul 10th, '11, 07:27

Don't ever come at me like that again! Restructure your body, your life and your amends, your structure could get disembodied, not to start shit, but I know karate, violence, admit defeat before scenes, omit to me, give! In! Please! You can not see! No eyes, I most likely can leave you with no teeth, no breath to take in and breathe, take one deep, inhale a fresh air in this night, I got you mother fuckers rapped up tight, and no ones shall die! Mummies come back alive, dragons can breath fire, take a drag of the fag you love boy you been expired! You been steamed raise up to me, what? You a geyser, or a wise guy, and a liar, pants on wires, shoes too, scoot, scoot, you a fool bout ta get my fucking boot! I have you loose shaking your looty, oh whats that to me but something you can have truly! This was me you see, here I show you poopy, oh whats this to me but something, and me, you can't have truly! I'm truly the only cool pool dipping magnificent tripping half ripping you apart with these claws Jaws teeth razor sharp awe, when my alter ego takes a hold and you get street sharked off, behold you got my animality! A beat car parked a lot, reserved spot, that sir Josh, ha, get served Spock death grip a ship ta set sail don't reckon with, get it, kid!
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Re: Mother Fuckers can not forget about Marshal

Postby Blu » Jul 10th, '11, 07:28

Wtf happened to this forum. :shakehead:
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Almostlity wrote:Grow up faggots

EminemInsider wrote:Jesus Christ, HOW FUCKING STUPID ARE YOU PEOPLE?!?!?!?!?!
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Re: Mother Fuckers can not forget about Marshal

Postby JawsBoof » Jul 15th, '11, 09:02

That's is the most creative writing I've seen on this forum, this guy deserves a fucking a dollar from everyone here!
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Re: Mother Fuckers can not forget about Marshal

Postby JawsBoof » Jul 15th, '11, 21:28

Word hook it up!
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