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School Massacers (Columbine High)

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School Massacers (Columbine High)

Postby Static » Jul 16th, '11, 01:30

That title hopefully caught your attention. This is the start of a song I'm writing, The entire verse ain't about Columbine, but I mention it towards the end. Oh, and it is a little poetic at some parts, but I think it should be fairly easy to understand what I'm trying to say.

A soldier is one who's being shoved into the lockers/
One who takes knuckles and blows like a boxing sack/
Six hours of the clock to that/
How come every one is shocked when his glock cocks back/
How would you react to all the ruthless beating/
You're toothless, screaming, got bruises, bleeding
You would explode, and you'd see the reason (gun cocks back)/
To shoot that episode that concludes the season (gun-shots)/
Cause every single night when you go to bed/
You wish it was cascet you could close instead/
All the years you bled, you've taken those unsaid/
Now your voice is dead, and so are you too/
Though your blood was red, and your bruises blue/
They need someone to blame so they are choosing you/
I ain't accusing only bullies of Columbine High/
But if you think it's black and white you have colorblind eyes/

Any piece of feedback is highly appreciated! :worship:

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They say the good die young,
That's why I think that you should have fun
Cos time won't wait for no one
When god calls, you gotta go home
They say the good die young
That's why I know that we go' have fun,
In this life cos you only get one
When God calls for me, don't cry I just went home ♪
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