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[ArsheyHaq]

Lol enjoy!


You're at the peak of perfection; unique and feminine/
and as sweet as cinnamon--nahhh, that's too weak a synonym/
I'm completely genuine; a decent gentleman/
and I'd like to share, with you, these deepest sentiments/
but when I see you it's like my body's released adrenaline/
can't complete a sentence or even speak like I've developed a speech impediment!!/
BUT you've got me humming songs I don' remember words to/
an introvert who--craves your sight, touch, and scent of perfume/
so when your parents decided to extend your curfew/
I, out of my own sick sense of virtue,/
took it as a sign to kidnap and kill you..whoops, never meant to hurt you!/



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[PeNGuiN ZoMbiE]

BAHAHAHAHAHAHA WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT AT ALL HAHAHAHA. i was almost positive it was a love song but now i dont know what it is haha. this is a great read. i love the humor rap. keep at it man

[Maybe]

Fucking amazing with an awesome ending. I don't even have to tell you what was great about this.

[Enimee]

damn near perfect for sure, i mean i have no complaints honestly nothing to say about it...

but i def like the way you set up the introvert who- line that shit was hard, i caught the flow as soon as i started reading it, nice use of words btw

[Ka0t1c]

hahaha, very cool quick piece, has a lot of goodness to dissect from, thank you much

[ArsheyHaq]

Haha thanks, guys. Just thought I'd post a "what a twisstt!" piece lol I'm glad that those of you who left feed enjoyed it

[J.R.]

Awesome and bahahahahaahah xD

That's really all that can be said about this awesome art.


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