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Lied to a corner.

Postby J.R. » Aug 16th, '11, 20:40

Don't give a fuck if you don't like it, posting it to help me vent over something that happened.

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No beat, acapella screaming <.<



You Said you loved me? Well....
You know why I can't believe that babe,
It's not your feelings I am trying to save,
It's my own, from the lies you said that shot me down,
You had me then, but you don't got me now...
You had me in your little finger, twisting and turning,
Used me like a towel, no shower instead I wish you were burning *
You made me feel like everything was my fault, had depression for weeks,
It was so awful, My friends saw it, Tried settling it, But I had settled for weak..
Everything was bleak, and it looked like I'd never heal from your scars,
I couldn't see, All I could see was you and my money driving off in the car,
I've been trapped in this corner, waiting on the call from the clinic,
Apparently, I've rapped my feelings out, Clinical depression? I'm in it.



Couldn't write anymore...
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Re: Lied to a corner.

Postby Mr.DGAF » Aug 18th, '11, 04:20

:y: I like the emotion in it. Technically, it's not incredibly spectacular. But the emotion in it is enough for me to really feel what you're saying.
You'd be surprised...
How many truths you can hide in flows

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