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Short Story & Gin

Postby Man1x » Sep 3rd, '11, 06:52

Feed: http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=124479

A little stupid 3 bar song I put together in 3 minutes for the sake of it. Enjoy, I know it's not that great but I wanted to use my hot dog line :) I think it's deep but IDK, yall decide.

[Intro]

{Drinking Gin}

{Me}

Okay, hahaha so ya. Your gonna love this one…. Here is another creepy story. Guess you could say I got a lot of those.

{Friend}

What is it?

{Me}

Well, motherfucka, I’ll yell ya…

[Verse]

Ran across a fag in a restaurant stall, told me, “I like my food hot dawg”/
Now I looked through the fog, took my gloc, shot him on the spot, Pac/
Would be proud, made it through the cock club, and ran out the door/
(Sure) Seriously, right after I found and stabed a bland, proud, old whore/
(Really) Really!, was badass like the cold war, wanna hear how it ends?/
(How?) Well, really it depends on what I do now, croud around this gin/ (Gen)

[Outro]

{Poors Liquid Into Friends Cup}

{Friend Drinks}

Dumbass, must be very drunk to not know that shits gasolene.

{Friend}

Wha –

{Lights a match and throws into his mouth}

End of the story, bitch. Hahaahaha, next time, pay for the gin….
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Re: Short Story & Gin

Postby Man1x » Sep 3rd, '11, 07:05

Eminememy wrote:Feed: http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=124479

A little stupid 3 bar song I put together in 3 minutes for the sake of it. Enjoy, I know it's not that great but I wanted to use my hot dog line :) I think it's deep but IDK, yall decide.

[Intro]

{Drinking Gin}

{Me}

Okay, hahaha so ya. Your gonna love this one…. Here is another creepy story. Guess you could say I got a lot of those.

{Friend}

What is it?

{Me}

Well, motherfucka, I’ll yell ya…

[Verse]

Ran across a fag in a restaurant stall, told me, “I like my food hot dawg”/
Now I looked through the fog, took my gloc, shot him on the spot, Pac/
Would be proud, made it through the cock rock, and ran out the door/
(Sure) Seriously, right after I found and stabed a bland, proud, old whore/
(Really) Really!, was badass like the cold war, wanna hear how it ends?/
(How?) Well, really it depends on what I do now, croud around this gin/ (Gen)

[Outro]

{Poors Liquid Into Friends Cup}

{Friend Drinks}

Dumbass, must be very drunk to not know that shits gasolene.

{Friend}

Wha –

{Lights a match and throws into his mouth}

End of the story, bitch. Hahaahaha, next time, pay for the gin….
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Re: Short Story & Gin

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Sep 3rd, '11, 08:35

It's unique, I'll give you that. It's definitely something that you'd see in a little skit or something. I like. :y:
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Re: Short Story & Gin

Postby Man1x » Sep 3rd, '11, 17:40

Yea, could've made it longer but really was too tired, like the hot dog line? I was hoping some people would get it. It's like a young money punchline but still, i think i did it better than they could
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