Geno - Goodnight

[Man1x]

Fucking amazing Geno, was waiting for a piece by you. I really like:

My head feels like a thousand pounds, wait I think I found the house,
Got no time to clown around, I think I might just drown my spouse,

I like it cause you did a reverse multi, you may have done it before but that one I caught real easy

Edit: Forgot to mention the flow was good as well as the structure

[Man1x]

I think you are good enought to go beyond 4 and 3 syllable rhymes as your normal, maybe more intricate rhyme schemes.

[Blu]

This piece really reminds me of "Kim".. but it's still a good piece none the less.

It flowed well, at least to me.

Got no time to clown around, I think I might just drown my spouse,
Stomach filled with growling sounds, I should get a bite to eat,
If I kill her boyfriend too, that would equal twice the meat,

We got a motherfuckin cannibal in the hiz-house!!

Good shit Geno.

Now feed me. Please?

[WakeUpShow]

Good stuff. I liked the use of inverse multis with the "cry and weep" and "deep inside" rhyme schemes. The internal rhymes really made it flow nice. And I liked the story and the visuals that went along with it.

[SG.]

That was great. Loved the inverse multis, and liked the storytelling aspect.

[JamaicanPattlez]

Did you listen to Relapse then write this? Haha, it had a semi-Relapse flow to it. Great job as always, liked the flow and the rhymes. My only question is this:

My head feels like a thousand pounds, wait I think I found the house,

Why does your head feel like a thousand pounds, is it due to your thoughts and emotions weighing down? Just need clarification.

Feed me back? viewtopic.php?f=24&t=124226

[Man1x]

Relapse = dope shit. Anyway, Geno.

[Man1x]

I started writing around the summer. I was depressed as fuck one day last year cause of a bad break up, friend told me to download Airplanes. The Eminem verse left me jaw open, I started listening to it over and over. Then I downloaded Recovery and was blown away, that saved my life as well, I was going through some hard shit, no just a bad break up. I wanted to kill myself cause I was facing 25 to Life for a Facebook prank. That album got me over the hump and was able to get forgiveness from the person I hurt. Then I decided to make it a mission to learn about hip hop cause I used to only listen to the beats. I started by getting all the Eminem albums, then I wanted the discography and that's how I ended here. I have learned so much about the genre from this site, been a real eye opener and learning experience. My views on music have changed as well, used to be into pop shit because I never listened to music before Recovery, can't live without music now. I thought Recovery was the best thing ever, now I know better that it is no where near the best and I love SSLP, MMLP, & TES the most, i like N9na, Hopsin, etc. Well, anyways. Recovery will be my favorite album cause of what it did for me. I only been listening since I was 13 now I'm 14. And, wow I just told you my life story haha. I just had so many flashbacks that I had to share sorry Anyway, been only writing for 1 month. And here we are, I've done a complete turn around with my life and happier than ever This has been an excuse to vent cause I never shared this story before.

EDIT: Not 25 to Life, was thinking of the song. It was more like 18-20 years jail time for impersonation of my principal.

[Man1x]

Sorry

When I mentioned when you started it reminded me why I did.
Anyway, back on topic. Good piece like I said before and I can't wait to see the work you and Menzo did on the Ego EP.

[Words]

Shit....now I'm depressed.
Good work though, I'd critique but I'm just starting out on my own so I don't think I'd be much help. Nice though