Geno - Malcolm X

[Sekou]

The flow on this one was phenomenal, although your rhyming wasn't up to what I've read in some of your other pieces.
Still a really nice piece

[SG.]

Flow was great, although the rhyming was kinda iffy.

[J.R.]

Rhyming isn't your level, but the flow is amazing.

[Man1x]

Hey, the rhymes aren't your level like everyone said but you carried a good flow, it had a good story with imagery, and good structure. If this is a throwout I can't wait to see your best, good shit

Feed?: http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=125229

[Man1x]

i didn't catch that pun, good shit there. What I mean when the rhymes are your level for some reason its harder to catch the transitions imo, might just be the way im reading it

[ChristinaE12]

Good piece.. Different. But I think that is a good thing in this case.

I think most are saying the rhyming isn't your normal level because it is definitely a different type of rhyme scheme going on. It's not as easy to catch as I've typically seen from you.

Not much else really to say as most has already been done.

[EyeQ200]

One of the best peices i've read here in a while, glad we have members here at CW such as you Geno
I don't really understand the sub standard rhyming, i thought it was an all round solid peice in terms of rhyming, as someone said maybe it was the structure here, i liked the peice but can sort of tell it's a throw away (Still better than my best )
Nice peice!

[Atone]

this is pretty dope, alot of multi syllabul rhyming in this in which i love

[RainMan44]

Excuse me for the corny metaphor but, this shit flowed like a river tbh
Flow was beautiful.

I actually caught that 'Geno' punch. Dope as fuck.

The rhyming is still above average, don't see why some are saying it's not. You might've had better pieces, but this is still great.



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