Religiously Confused

[Mr.DGAF]

So many obligations with so little time to pray for them
Damnit God I’m waiting if you’d feel my cries and take a whim
Man it’s hard, debating if you’d heel my eyes and make a gem
And I’ve tried, impatient but it kills my pride to say I’ve sinned
And may I grin, though it’s ironic how moronic I’ve become
Smoking chronic is platonic, it’s like toxins, what I’ve done
Hopefully I’m still your son, I know there’s many on this planet
Woefully I’d kill someone just so you’d know right where I’m standin’
And I’ve planned it, I will never succumb to the devil’s threats
So fuck ‘em if it ever gets, above a threat, I’ll level it
My faith in you will never fret for you’re a prime specimen
My skepticism rises when a crisis hits thy better men
Just think of Nine eleven when Americans were getting grim
We hit the brim, and fell on in, I wonder where those parents went
Wishing for there kids to live; they cried and cried forever now,
Why’d they have to end like this, when I die, am I heaven bound?


Feed:http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=129972

[Spyder]

pretty dope shit man, loved the rhyming entire lines im a big fan of that
because in my mind if you can do it right it speaks complexity. its just hard to make it all coherent
but you did it.

thought your thoughts on the beginning were a little random but you corrected it towards the end

8.5/10 for a quick read

[mdemaz]

I can't believe you did whole lines man.
That's just ridiculous.

Theme isn't really my thing, but it was well written.

[Sam.]

What the fuck man ?

Does your skill play hide & seek with you that you drop dope pieces alternately.This was so good man ,I can say it's more pro tbh. Flawless. Keep at it.

[Mr.DGAF]

Thanks for the feed guys, really appreciate it.

And Sam, the way my pieces are released isn't chronologically, which is basically just saying that if some pieces seem off compared to the next ones I drop, it's because they are older. When I do collabs and stuff, my verses are done pretty much the day I sign up or host a collab, and then I have to wait about a week for it to drop. So while it may drop on one day, it could be weeks older. And then all my actual solo stuff is done and posted here quite quickly.

[Man1x]

crazzzzzzzzy dopeeeeeeeeeeeee e e e ee e ....... e

[SG.]

Rhyming great. Concept great. I'd quote Man1x but he doesn't seem to be able to type properly.

Feed back? viewtopic.php?f=24&t=130628

[Sam.]

crazzzzzzzzy dopeeeeeeeeeeeee e e e ee e ....... e

Very Insightful feed there.

[Man1x]

crazzzzzzzzy dopeeeeeeeeeeeee e e e ee e ....... e

Very Insightful feed there.

Sorry, that was me jizzing all over the screen after reading this.

[Mr.DGAF]

Haha, thanks Zabe and Man1x. 'Preciate the feed.

And I got you Zabe, I'ma feed your piece in a second.

[J.R.]

Fucking..I puked due to to much dopeness. Nothing really to creatique...You've improved..Big time.

[TommiTMX]

Mind...blown.

Epic is all I have to say, first couple of lines took a while for me to get into for some reason but once I carried on reading the flow and rhymes just seemed flawless.

[Ka0t1c]

tight piece, that blew my mind

[Jdubem]

Dope rhyming and I thought the lyrics followed each other pretty nicely as well and Im not even someone who gets into the whole christian religious pride type of thing.

[JamaicanPattlez]

Dope piece. Dammit, now I have to step my game up. But for real though, great job.