Lryical Masterminds (ft. Zabe, Blu, Man1x, Sekou & JP)

[Mr.DGAF]

BILI's gonna try and drop a verse here soon, and if he does, I'll certainly edit this post and put it on in. Be prepared, it's a long read. Hopefully worth the time, though.

Mr.DGAF Feed: http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=130284&p=1779319#p1779319
Blu's feed: http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=71&t=123817&p=1742200#p1742200
JP's feed: http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=130184&p=1779293#p1779293
Man1x feed: http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=130184&p=1779293#p1779293
Zabe's feed: http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=128796
Sekou's feed: http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=71&t=129316&p=1779109#p1779109

(Chorus)
Spewing rhymes while doing lines, he is here and will amaze
Dude it’s time, a mastermind, you should fear the killer Zabe

(Zabe’s Verse)
Look, is it a bird, no, it's a lyrical mastermind!
Shoving a turd right up Samantha's behind
Dropping ink bombs like a octomom named Saddam
Shit, the page blacked out, ram up the sound to optimum
Have you ever experienced things like Love & War?
Look, it's promotion, I'm on here bumping forums!
Geno, you know I like you, but for this verse you're dead
Take your cerebral, rip it out of you and curse your head
"That was only 3 syllables, step up your multis"
There were only free criminals, crept up (they're so sly)
11 syllable, holy shit, did you see that?!
Course you didn't, you're an ignorant tree sap!
Rhyme just for the sake of it, I'm just self-imposing
Fine, I'm not taking it, thrust on this life I've chosen
Think you've got the swagger, as fly as killer bees
Fuck off, lyrical masterminds, nobody's as ill as me

(Chorus)
Spewing rhymes while doing lines, I’m about to live it up
Dude it’s time, a mastermind, Mr. Just Don’t Give A Fuck

(Mr. DGAF’s Verse)
Lyrically I’m such a mastermind, the faster kind, a rapper’s mind
Is nothing but an actor’s lines, I plaster rhymes, disaster’s fine
As long as you can pass the time, it’s asinine to have to shine
Just ask Denaun, he’ll have the time, all he does is plan to rhyme
And man while I’m, on the subject, take a look at Eminem
Bring a book for Mr. Slim, he says that “I ain’t dissing him
He’s dope and man give me a pen, I’ll write a hook for him and him”
Man fuck the hooks, give him a hint, your rhymes are so repetitive
Fill a line with expletives, “man fuck this shit, I better win”
Kill my time with sedatives, why is it that my negatives
Outweigh the kind and good, man is life just a mega bitch
From Wayne’s rhyming book, can’t he manage just another hit?
Skinny Jeans and fitted caps, Big old rings and glittered hats
Littered raps are running rampant, yet I haven’t seen the gallant
Help escort this game from madness, everyone thinks that they dope
Well of fame, I think I’ve had this, squeezing air from out they throat

(Chorus)
Spewing rhymes while doing lines, he ain’t really feeling you
Dude it’s time, a mastermind, please bow down because it’s Blu

(Blu’s verse)
Lyrical mastermind, I can't touch a mic again without my vicodin
I might just then write like them
Cuz winners they blow, momentum in their direction
And sinners they flow, venom likes Tupac's resurrection
Gettin' an erection for every section I write
And I'm bout to fight like Mike Tyson
Cuz I'm tenser than a bison
And Mike, better get ready for the fightin'
While I'm lightin' the match, ignitin' it fast
Lyrical mastermind, your mind ain't faster than mine
Syrup will, turn your day into nyquil
Sleepin' before you can even spit your first verse
And the second you wake up you're found in a hearse
That's it, I'm done, this shit only got worse
Ain't no fun, it's a curse, I'd rather be blessed
I'm pretty sure I ain't depressed, no matter how much cess I digest

(Chorus)
Spewing rhymes while doing lines, get ready but don’t panic
Dude it’s time, a mastermind, he’s deadly, go get ‘em Manix

(Man1x’s Verse)
A lyrical mastermind, a miracle crafting rhymes/
Raise these cripples gasping blind, breaking shackles latching minds/
Still drafting lines, making simple, lasting rhymes while I rap/
Time's collapse, style's relapse grinding chance I craft my mind's path/
Risked my craft to wipe my life's past, killed it, passing five dyeing laughs/
This will blast these minds, my style's fast trill is slaying mics, try my wrath/
Trickle down these spines as I grasp fickle bastards try to shy back/
Missiles massing behind my blast, this will shatter rhymes built from glass/

(Chorus)
Spewing rhymes while doing lines, don’t care what you say dude
Dude it’s time, a mastermind, okay, it’s time to go in Sekou

(Sekou’s verse)
Ayo... fuck a stipulation, you know I'm a lyrical mastermind
Smacked my bitch up in church and made the spiritual pastor cry
Challenged Bolt to a race and left his miserable ass behind
"What? Dawg, that didn't really happen, right?"
Nah, I guess I'm just so high that I gotta be past the sky
While you're sitting at home in an embittering mood
And even when I throw up on alphabet soup, I spit sicker lyrics than you
I listened to your shit, and I ain't feelin' a lot of these raps
Sayin' you constantly strapped, but you just make me laugh like a comedy act
You won't catch me rappin about a gun or a knife
Still you better get up and run for your life -
when I stick my dick in her butt and bust a nut in your wife
Pull my cock out, and cum on her twice
Then pick you up to mop the stains with your hair
Think I give a fuck if you beg me to stop the pain and despair?
I'll batter your skull till I'm chucking chunks of your brain in the air
Gather up the pieces and serve them for lunch
Yeah, they call me a one hit wonder, but it's cause I knock you out with a punch

(Chorus)
Spewing rhymes while doing lines, he’ll make ‘em rattled
Dude it’s time, a mastermind, here is Jamacain Pattlez

(JP’s verse)
What are the clues you know of for a lyrical mastermind?
It's simple, they use brute force when they rip it all past the rhymes,
The past divines of Hip Hop won't stop until it's saved,
So be brave young knave, cause with problems come the fame,
It's like an orchestra in your mind, tie in the core of your knowledge,
But you're forcin' a kid with no time to be assigned to college,
If Lil Wayne's the best alive then I'm a dead man walking,
You're insane, go stick your dick in a train while he says "I'm rocking ".

[JamaicanPattlez]

Damn! This is fire! Great job, you guys!

[Mr.DGAF]

Haha, damn this is crazy. Glad everyone was down, glad the verses were sent in, and I'll properly feed each verse some time later today.

[Man1x]

Fire is all I gotta say bitches

[SG.]

Fire from errbody. The thread's in flames!

[Sam.]

Zabe

Heavily disappointed with your verse to be frank .I mean you have writing here since a very long time ,but it seems after a few good drops you have began to slip down the ice cream cone .You tried to take shots ,there you failed miserably .Tried rhyming many Syllables there again shit seemed forced. I got a very rough feel in the verse because of the way it was delivered .This is not your best brah, keep at it though.

Mr. DGAF

Ah ! the verse started of with so many multis that was totally unnecessary ,you could have actually spread them in the following lines.Whoa ! IDK what I read from the 3rd bar onwards because everything seemed pretty random for me to comprehend the story or the theme. You focused to much on the Rhyming that you seemed lost or confused as to what you wanna say in the 1st place. The only saving grace for this piece is it’s flow tbh. Average verse .

Blu

You should either practice to write Rhymes or just stop writing because you fail to understand the basic thing in writing Raps that is they are basically Poetry with Rhythm.It also means you need to Rhyme words not just put random lines together and call it a verse.I noticed that there were a lot of random lines in between that did not make sense at all and top it most of the bars didn’t even Rhyme.You tried rhyming complete lines with same sound sounding words ? That is not the way you do it bruh ! You need to start working on the basics bruh !

Man1x

Why in the fucking world is your verse so small as compared to others.When you sent me your verse yesterday I though you were gonna add more lines to this.Anyway..I really liked the content of your verse you put it in complex way which was good.Liked the Multis in the 1st bar.
Infact the multi placement was wrong it was all over the place tbh.I told you in that PM to maintain the same multi scheme just for the flow because it was off by a thicker margin.
But…never mind overall a good piece till now from what I have read till now.

Sekou

Props for bringing some thing different to the table. The content was good till the midway but then it got a little redundant to me, same old played out topic of fucking and cuming on top blahahahaha XD .I liked the overall flow of the verse ,so good job there. My advise to you would be is up your Vocab & use complex words to Rhyme.


JP

Pretty decent verse tbh after Man1x.You did a good job man ,no critiques for this one.

[SG.]

What flavour is it?

[JamaicanPattlez]

Blu's verse isn't as bad as Sam makes it out to be.

He can't pick up the flow imo.

Weird thing is, you should automatically have some sort of flow in your head, how come he didn't?

[SG.]

@Sam: In the verse I was making fun of the way it was forced. Are you saying my verse is shit beacuse you're butthurt about the diss? Just kidding, I agree with you.

@Geno: This is not a deliberate shot at you like Spyder has been doing. I've just been mentioning you a few times and my brain's not very creative. Also, Geno kinda rhymes with cerebral.

[Man1x]

My multi placement was the same except the second bar, I did that to transition to the next scheme better. Guess it didn't work

[Sam.]

Where did i mention about the flow ? I read it twice before giving feed .And what happened to the Individual Opinion thing hunh ?

Zabe I didn't take anything personal ,lol.

[mdemaz]

Lyrically I’m such a mastermind, the faster kind, a rapper’s mind
Is nothing but an actor’s lines, I plaster rhymes, disaster’s fine
As long as you can pass the time, it’s asinine to have to shine
Just ask Denaun, he’ll have the time, all he does is plan to rhyme

Craziest shit there.
Everyone else went in pretty hard too, but not really as hard as it could of been.
Nevertheless, you guys killed it.

[Man1x]

Answer my statement Sam., when you say they placement hindered the flow, how did it? Cause it was all the same except for the second bar which was used for transitioning.

Edit: I mean I had to do that cause I was rhyming full bars with 7 syllable splits to help it flow, that's why I did the transition.

[Sam.]

Answer my statement Sam., when you say they placement hindered the flow, how did it? Cause it was all the same except for the second bar which was used for transitioning.

Edit: I mean I had to do that cause I was rhyming full bars with 7 syllable splits to help it flow, that's why I did the transition.

I prefer consistency in Rhyme schemes,but we are not geniuses so it all good son.

[Man1x]

Answer my statement Sam., when you say they placement hindered the flow, how did it? Cause it was all the same except for the second bar which was used for transitioning.

Edit: I mean I had to do that cause I was rhyming full bars with 7 syllable splits to help it flow, that's why I did the transition.

I prefer consistency in Rhyme schemes,but we are not geniuses so it all good son.

Ight, I see what you mean but do there doesn't have to have 100% consistence if you flow it a certain way so it works, right?