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Postby SG. » Oct 10th, '11, 20:09

[Intro]
Menzo wrote:it's cool how Zabe was keeping it TR relevant

[Verse]
So apparently Love & War cannot co-exist
It seems everybody round here wants to Infamous
Clear cut, uncut, still spitting venom
Everybody yearns for secrets and I'm still not telling
I'm a champion, just like the guy with 8 limbs
Too bad he can't afford a car in Maine, all he can do is make rims
So I just entered the room like an elephant
Who dares to say I'm not TRelevant?
Yeah, I'm slipping down the ice cream cone
Just because being a lyrical mastermind wasn't in my zone
You can be red, or you can infa-dead
Like the way OMEGA got his Beats on when he listening to RED
I ask you, I implore, who's got the massive Ego now?
The alias Alieus or is all the pain passed to Geno now?
I can say this winter's gonna be a cold one
If your hearts are freezing, you've got baggages, unload them
T a l k  l i k e  t h i s  w h e n  y o u  j u s t  d o n t  g i v e  a  f u c k
I simply prefer to be normal, and not like hidden punks
Hey, BlackViper, you ain't no venomous snake
You just got Parkinson's, prepare to shiver and shake
And B. Nutz, bust your nuts before you go nuts
You're butthurt like the inside of your hole got bigger than a donut
Yeah, I'm done, oh wait, fuck me too!
My songs are all wack, what can I possibly do?
So I just entered the room like an elephant
Who dares to say I'm not TRelevant?

[Outro]
Geno wrote:Zabe you're gonna get it.


LOF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=129368&start=15
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Re: TRelevant

Postby Sam. » Oct 10th, '11, 20:25

Good observation you have there bruh,you managed to say almost everything that was trending here.Nice freestyle and some name drops in it too.

Liked this tbh because it was put together well.

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The alias Alieus or is all the pain passed to Geno now?
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Re: TRelevant

Postby Mr.DGAF » Oct 10th, '11, 23:02

This was pretty good man, packs a better punch than the Lyrical Mastermind verse, imo. Sometimes the flow was a bit iffy, but the rhyming was pretty good. However, the best part of this piece is that you said everything you wanted in a completely coherent way. It was a pretty creative topic and you executed it well. There were a couple of random lines here and there, but for the most part, it was worded quite well. :y:
You'd be surprised...
How many truths you can hide in flows

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Re: TRelevant

Postby Man1x » Oct 10th, '11, 23:25

Someone is absorbed in Manîx cause he just can't stop mentioning him :whistle: :shakehead: :( :sweating: :unsure: :'( :crybye: :stretcher:



























































































Dope piece btw but the flow was a little iffy as already mentioned.
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Re: TRelevant

Postby SG. » Oct 10th, '11, 23:33

I mentioned everyone, so I don't know what your problem is. :whistle:

Thanks for the feed, everyone.
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Re: TRelevant

Postby Man1x » Oct 10th, '11, 23:38

Zabe wrote:I mentioned everyone, so I don't know what your problem is. :whistle:

Thanks for the feed, everyone.


I was just kidding... :wave:
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Re: TRelevant

Postby Words » Oct 11th, '11, 12:35

Sorry for the late feed.

Really good piece, solid rhyming and

Liked this tbh because it was put together well.


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